| "Contra Ipsum" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: Leila-14-Rose On: October 07, 2003 17:55 CDT
Comment/Review:
I love this idea! It'd be really cool if Yugi became even more popular than Yami... sweet! Can't wait for the next chapter. Ja ne!
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Reviewed By: FairysGift On: July 29, 2003 04:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Apart from your constant self critisim i'd say your fic has got off to an excellent start if you keep to the plot this could turn out to be a brilliant story. But you must lay off on the rants. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: UnconditionalBeliever (stupid thing won't lemme sign in -_-) On: July 28, 2003 21:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I know it's difficult to do _anything_ original with angst for Yuugi, as _everything_ seems to have been used at least one or ten times.
However you have talent, make it fresh and exciting. I really do like this story, how you wove your words and I _felt_ the room spinning as all the memories of negative comments raced through Yuugi's head: desperation.
I hope you continue this fic, because it's wonderful. I am so adding this to my favorites! |
