| "Lavender Rain" Reviews/Comments [ 15 ] |
Reviewed By: VaronsDemonicPrincess [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2005 18:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wooo...spiffy story....^.^ Update!!!
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Title: UPDATE VERY SOON PLEASE!!!
Reviewed By: Kris1rad [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2004 18:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
As I have said over a thousand times, PLEASE UPDATE VERY SOON!!! Mian and I love your story so we want you to update soon and put in song lyrics please. Also read my fan fics please and put in a Sahara/Malik romance.
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Reviewed By: anubiset On: June 30, 2004 03:58 CDT
Comment/Review:
Very good. As for the question... Threesome..hehehehe. sorry.
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Title: Malik/Sahara Romace Please!
Reviewed By: Kris1rad [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2004 15:55 CDT
Comment/Review:
Put in a Malik and Sahara romance please. I usually call Malik his USA name, Marik, and his Yami... well... Yami Marik. Also, put in some music lyrics. Can also make a chapter with music lyrics from one of my favorite songs, "Simple and Clean", from the Playstation 2 game,'"Kingdom Hearts?" Please update soon cause the cliffie is makin' me and Mian nuts! Also thank my Yami, Mian, for reviewer ya okay?
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Reviewed By: Maruken On: May 15, 2004 21:14 CDT
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I think Malik, Mariku's to crazy. Good job, I like both, Sahra isn't my favorite OC, but she isn't a Mary Sue, thank Ra. I thought of something really funny. Since Malik and Mariku argue on who gets posession of the body, wouldn't their hair act much like a fish? Flopping up and down, up and down. Just a funny thought I read somewhere.
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Reviewed By: Kris1rad [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2004 18:11 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Still like your story and I don't mind if ya are writing a story and it's rated R and ya only 13 years. I think of hentai stuff and I'm 13 too. Sheesh does it matter, this is a free country. We have our rights. Anyway, update soon cause the cliffie is really cool. Please update very soon! P.s.: I didn't expect Malik to be so mean to Sahara when they met, I thought there would be some sentilment and romance. I was fooled.
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Title: PLEASE UPDATE NOW!!!
Reviewed By: Kris1rad [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2004 17:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I totally love your story! You need to fix up the spelling and grammer but it is mostly mediaminer.org's fault. It screwed up most of my stories. *Gets really mad but calms down* Please make more chapters!!! PLEASE!!!! *Makes puppy eyes* I love your story a lot! Please read some of mine. You make your stories have so much emotion. Can you put in some music lyrics too? Mian (Kristen's Yami): "I love your story too. PLEASE MAKE MORE CHAPTERS OR WE'LL BOTH CRY!!! *Both Kristen and Mian cry very loudly* "WE LOVE YOUR STOREY!!! IT IS SO COOL!!! PLEASE UPDATE!!!"
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Reviewed By: Kris1rad [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2004 15:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love this story! The spelling and grammer could needs a little work. Make the chapters longer please. Do ya mind if I can borrow soom of yer ideas to put in one of my fan fics? I'll give you some of the credit. Please Update soon please! *Makes really cute puppy eyes*
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Title: Unknown
Reviewed By: Kewl On: February 14, 2004 12:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your writeing is good, and this is ready a good story. You really should update! Kewl story
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Reviewed By: Mariku182 On: December 21, 2003 22:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It a good fanfic and you should keep writing. Oh! Is Yami Marik gonna appear? Oh! Update Soon. Please!!!!!
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Reviewed By: lusciousdragon [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2003 11:03 CDT
Comment/Review:
Still good, don't be disappointed by the low number of reviews, people these days, they just can't be bothered... You ARE an awesome writer!!! |
Reviewed By: blondie_blader_grl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2003 18:25 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice story so far!!
B_B_G |
Reviewed By: lusciousdragon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2003 14:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
SURE... You other people are reading the fanfic, but are you REVIEWING? Nooooooooo... SHESH!!! *shakes her head sadly at other readers* YOU MUST UPDATE!!!! oppps...sorry for being bossy, I must go update myself.... |
Reviewed By: lusciousdragon On: July 30, 2003 13:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow... Thanks for the compliment, but I think you are a better writer, this story is REALLY good... You MUST UPDATE, though IT IS tough updating, I hate it... |
Reviewed By: lusciousdragon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2003 12:29 CDT
Comment/Review:
That was really...really good. You gotta update... I really liked it... |
