| "The Deal" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: ~Spyke~ On: August 31, 2005 21:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was just MEAN!!!!!FINISH IT OR A RABID HORNY PAGASUS WILL BE SICCED UPON YOU!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: VictimOfCircumstance
Reviewed By: VictimOfCircumstance [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2005 07:00 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
ooooooh... sexy... no offense, but it's always ryou/bakura/malik. i love the coupling malik/marik/bakura. but that might be because i despise ryou. once again, no offense. anyway, continue. Oh, and if Marik's Girl ever reads this... yeah, for one, Malik is the hikari and Marik is the yami. and also, do you actually believe that you are immortal? Or are you just so pathetically in need of attention that you would talk like that?
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Reviewed By: nanishi On: March 12, 2005 22:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love it!!! this is a good author, she is good at make the story come alive for the reader. FINSH!!!!!!
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Title: oh you naughty...
Reviewed By: dm10 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2004 15:43 CST
Comment/Review:
How DARE you end it there?! I need to have a nice juicy lemon in there with Malik-kun. Him and Mokuba are my favorites. They way you described him in Forgive and Forget, well, oh holy crap, I think I went to heaven and back. Mmmmmmmmmmmmm... so sexy Delicious! Please finish, even, if you have to NC-17? PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEASE! You tease!
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Reviewed By: Telis [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2003 12:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
That was pretty interesting. Can't wait to find out wat happens next. |
Reviewed By: Rea On: July 30, 2003 22:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YOU CAN'T STOP THERE THAT MEAN. PLEASE CONTINUE.
OH, AND TO MARIK'S GIRL MARIK IS ONLY THE HIKARI IN THE DUB VERSION NOT IN THE ORIGINAL JAPANESE ONE. |
Reviewed By: Marik's Girl On: July 28, 2003 16:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Marik is the Hikari and Malik is the Yami. A Mortal should know this. I am not mortal so of course I would know this. |
Reviewed By: Roxy On: July 28, 2003 12:47 CDT
Comment/Review:
Pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease continue!
This is such an awsome story! |
