| "Perfect" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: kender On: December 29, 2003 08:54 CST
Comment/Review:
Kender-trunks has lost it. LokiBu-I liked it. Mal-You would. Great story, a bit disturbing tho...
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Title: Whoa
Reviewed By: Black fey On: November 11, 2003 10:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
HI! Wow, I usually don't enjoy fics that put "Ittle Wittle Goten" through rape but I couldn't stop reading this. I'm not sure I like the fic, like what it's about ie: rape but I did like your writing and the way you portrayed *Evil trunks*! Yay on you! Great job.
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Reviewed By: GreenEyes276 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2003 22:36 CDT
Comment/Review:
O_O
Umm...I dont know what to say. Great writting and disturbing as well. My poor little cutie Goten!! Trunks finally cracked *evil chuckle* Good story! =o) |
