| "Naomi, the Black Kitsune" Reviews/Comments [ 32 ] |
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Reviewed By: silver_wolf [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2006 22:57 CDT
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You say "Happy New Year'... and yet you don't update even 2 years later...!!! *TEARZ*!!!~!!
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Reviewed By: MarsStarlight [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2006 20:35 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are doing a great job. I hope you update your fanfic soon. You have an excellent creative side keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Dragons Talons [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2005 17:13 CDT
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hehehe, i loved it! you should continue to write more of this story. It was too cool. And i love the plot you have going on.
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Reviewed By: DreamAnimeKitten [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2005 16:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A very enjoyable story. Looking forward to the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Kage Hogosha [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2005 18:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was...... great! well, mabye not great but i really liked it. *pulls out mike* now for the word of the day. the word of the day is..... HANYOU!!!(^_~)
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Reviewed By: Sheshe On: January 21, 2005 23:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was great. Please update soon has you can. Can't wait for the next one. See ya. ^__^
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Reviewed By: HieiFan666 On: November 19, 2004 16:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello. I started reading your fic on ff.net and I really wanted to read the next chapter. I'm just a freak. Anyway. I really liked it and I hope you update soon. I can tell I am really going to enjoy the final showdoamn, those fights are always the best. The lemon was good too, definatly good for your first one. You havn't been practicing...have you!?!Oo. Lets hope not. Well, I hope you update soon. So, yeah, thats about it. Don't forget to update soon, VERY SOON. Just making sure you update SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I think that's about it. So, I'm gonna go now, right now. I'm gonna stop typing. MY GOD!!!!!!!! MY HANDS WON'T STOP TYPING!!!!! AAHHHHHHHHHHHHHH HELP ME!!!!!!!!! Somebody cut them off or something. Help. They've got a mind of theire own, and it's so wrong. No one should type this much noncence in a review... Wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I think they stopped. YYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHH HHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!I am free. SO i'm really going to go this time. Just remember to update. Gomen, I have to keep typing, this counter thing that counts down the amount of characters left you have to type with is amusing. Well I'm done. Ja ne
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Reviewed By: midnightdemon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2004 05:09 CST
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it's almost been a year sense you updated. come on, show some sympethy. please i'm begging you.
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Title: YOU!!
Reviewed By: Pissedoff On: September 03, 2004 10:58 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you haven't updated in motnths!!!! UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: midnightdemon [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2004 08:08 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
its been months sence you last updated, what did we do to you to deserve this kind of torcher.
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Title: O-kay?
Reviewed By: Anime_Addicted On: June 22, 2004 15:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well I suppose that i was a lil suprised,but I guess I should have been prepared for a lemon!lol. Well, the fic is totally great and i cant wait until you update!! BYEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Naako [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2004 21:52 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please dont stop now this is a great story and it is starting to get intresting also it has been 4 months since you update and i am trying my best to be patient and every day that does bye that pateints is getting smaller and smaller so can you please update i dont want to be rude/mean but it has been a log time since you've update Bye for now
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Title: God damn thats good
Reviewed By: Hieis Sadist Bitch Nadiya [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2004 04:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn i loved that, i will say the sex between me and Hiei made me horny beyond doubt,i cant wait for the update. so by that pleeeeaaaase hurry up and update.. Hope you come read my story.
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Reviewed By: YoukoKuramalvr6 On: May 06, 2004 17:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey you have totally gotta update as soon as you get the chance AND PLEASE TRY NOT TO MAKE THE LEMONS AS LONG NEXT TIME! I know that this is a rated R story but if my dad finds out he won't be a happy camper but i can't resist such a good story! So if you can please try to fulfill these requests but then again we can't make everyone happy can we?
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Reviewed By: Luraia On: April 11, 2004 15:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good! It rare to see a Hiei x OC so I'm glad I saw this one! I got angry at ff.net too when they threatened to pull my story so I put it on mediaminer too. its a Kurama x OC called Winter's Wrath. just wanted to let you know! Ciao!!
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Reviewed By: Sapphire Kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2004 18:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
I think that u did a good job for ur first lemon, it's better then wat my friend made for her first lemon heh, keep up the good work Sapphire Kitsune P.S. Hiei is my fav character
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Reviewed By: Sapphire Kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2004 18:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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I think that u did a good job for ur first lemon, it's better then wat my friend made for her first lemon heh, keep up the good work Sapphire Kitsune P.S. Hiei is my fav character
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Title: One of the Best Fan-Fics
Reviewed By: Hana Maria On: January 28, 2004 12:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your Fan-fiction is wonderful. I love your overall style of writing and your take on the characters personalities are amazingly accurate. When I read this fiction, it feels as if I am reading a story from the original writers of the show. I love your story, please continue to write fan-fictions and continue this one, it is superb, as is the author.
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Reviewed By: Nina Angeles(won't let me log in) On: January 07, 2004 20:14 CST
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okay (chapter 2)very nice. i really don't have much to saY
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Reviewed By: Nina Angeles(won't let me sign in) On: January 07, 2004 20:02 CST
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i'm going to review after each chapter so each one you write i will review. starting now (prologue) great begaining
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Title: whoa...
Reviewed By: animelove(not logged in) On: January 02, 2004 14:34 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that chapter was...NICE!!!!! (in the most increased way possible...) update........please?
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Reviewed By: jettwolf90 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2004 00:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*claps* You updated! That was great! Please write more! Just thinking of Hiei in a tux sends shivers down my spine!! ~jettwolf90/LRG*
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Reviewed By: jettwolf90 On: December 23, 2003 14:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story! Please keep writing!! ~jettwolf90/LRG
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Title: Mary Sue!!!!!
Reviewed By: SCREW CANADA! On: December 02, 2003 18:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 2 of 10 Comment/Review:
EWWWWWW....No more Mary Sues! I cant take this! Hasen't this fandom been bashed enough?! Heie belongs with Karama... not a sickeningly sweet Mary Sue.... I hate Mary Sues and this one is one of the worst I've seen...
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Title: Poof.
Reviewed By: Mooselini McSqueegee [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2003 00:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whoo. Love the story. I found one or two spelling mistakes, but I'm too damn lazy to look them up right now. (Ain't I just great? ^_^) Anyhooble... Update soon! I'm looking forward to reading the rest.
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Reviewed By: darksqall On: November 18, 2003 13:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you had to stop it right there didnt you|????? DIDNT YOU AHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!
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Title: animelove
Reviewed By: this is animelove On: October 28, 2003 18:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
why why why why why why why why why why why why why don't you update? i need this fanfic! it's my nutrition everyday!
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Reviewed By: chibikoinu On: October 23, 2003 21:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey! this fic is really good! took u a while to update though..i hope u get the next chapter up soon and im lookin forward to a lemon with hiei and naomi soon!!! ^_^
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Title: yo
Reviewed By: White Angel Chi {media miner member} On: October 20, 2003 20:59 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love the fic cant wait for the promised lemon
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Title: liar
Reviewed By: Nick Stoup On: September 15, 2003 21:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You lied,you said it sucked!It's a really good story,in fact it was so good that i'm pissed that you just left it hanging there...You really need to write more on the story,i was really enjoying it!
your friend,Nick |
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