| "Naomi, the Black Kitsune" Reviews/Comments [ 32 ] |
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Title: One of the Best Fan-Fics
Reviewed By: Hana Maria On: January 28, 2004 12:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your Fan-fiction is wonderful. I love your overall style of writing and your take on the characters personalities are amazingly accurate. When I read this fiction, it feels as if I am reading a story from the original writers of the show. I love your story, please continue to write fan-fictions and continue this one, it is superb, as is the author.
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Reviewed By: Nina Angeles(won't let me log in) On: January 07, 2004 20:14 CST
Comment/Review:
okay (chapter 2)very nice. i really don't have much to saY
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Reviewed By: Nina Angeles(won't let me sign in) On: January 07, 2004 20:02 CST
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i'm going to review after each chapter so each one you write i will review. starting now (prologue) great begaining
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Title: whoa...
Reviewed By: animelove(not logged in) On: January 02, 2004 14:34 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that chapter was...NICE!!!!! (in the most increased way possible...) update........please?
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Reviewed By: jettwolf90 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2004 00:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*claps* You updated! That was great! Please write more! Just thinking of Hiei in a tux sends shivers down my spine!! ~jettwolf90/LRG*
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Reviewed By: jettwolf90 On: December 23, 2003 14:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story! Please keep writing!! ~jettwolf90/LRG
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Title: Mary Sue!!!!!
Reviewed By: SCREW CANADA! On: December 02, 2003 18:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 2 of 10 Comment/Review:
EWWWWWW....No more Mary Sues! I cant take this! Hasen't this fandom been bashed enough?! Heie belongs with Karama... not a sickeningly sweet Mary Sue.... I hate Mary Sues and this one is one of the worst I've seen...
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Title: Poof.
Reviewed By: Mooselini McSqueegee [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2003 00:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whoo. Love the story. I found one or two spelling mistakes, but I'm too damn lazy to look them up right now. (Ain't I just great? ^_^) Anyhooble... Update soon! I'm looking forward to reading the rest.
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Reviewed By: darksqall On: November 18, 2003 13:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you had to stop it right there didnt you|????? DIDNT YOU AHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!
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Title: animelove
Reviewed By: this is animelove On: October 28, 2003 18:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
why why why why why why why why why why why why why don't you update? i need this fanfic! it's my nutrition everyday!
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Reviewed By: chibikoinu On: October 23, 2003 21:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey! this fic is really good! took u a while to update though..i hope u get the next chapter up soon and im lookin forward to a lemon with hiei and naomi soon!!! ^_^
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Title: yo
Reviewed By: White Angel Chi {media miner member} On: October 20, 2003 20:59 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love the fic cant wait for the promised lemon
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Title: liar
Reviewed By: Nick Stoup On: September 15, 2003 21:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You lied,you said it sucked!It's a really good story,in fact it was so good that i'm pissed that you just left it hanging there...You really need to write more on the story,i was really enjoying it!
your friend,Nick |
Reviewed By: jean On: July 31, 2003 14:49 CDT
Comment/Review:
hey you go!!!! i loved it please write more soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: midnitedreams On: July 30, 2003 12:20 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like your story. Poor Hiei, he's so confused lol. Hey plz update this. It's a good story. |
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