| "The Bells" Reviews/Comments [ 52 ] |
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Title: Shido89
Reviewed By: Shido89 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2003 12:34 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very very nice chapter. Cant wait for more.:)^_^
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Title: Reply
Reviewed By: CrimsonDreamer [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2003 03:58 CST
Comment/Review:
Thank you so much for catching that little slip Tygrrlyli578. And no, you didn't read it wrong, the line really was written wrong. Hopefully I got that fixed just after this latest post. Thank you once again! -^_^-
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Title: technical thing
Reviewed By: Tygrrlyli578 On: October 25, 2003 12:22 CDT
Comment/Review:
still love it, thank you so much for writing, oh yeah, there's one quick tenchical thing i saw (you can verbally abuse me if my "editing" is really wholly uncalled for). it was this sentence: "Master please. Please stop this," Stavros looked up to angelic deception that was his master. umm, the name, was it supposed to be Erik looking up? sorry if i read it wrong. but please pleeeease keep writing!! soo good ^_^
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Title: Shido89
Reviewed By: Shido89 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2003 09:32 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like, I cant wait for more of the story
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Reviewed By: sierra ruffner On: October 02, 2003 19:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like your stories and i hope that this is not the last of this series. Write More! please...
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Reviewed By: creotia_flayier [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2003 16:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i must say....bravo!! the whole story that you have developed is amazing. the past is best left buried, but for us readers it makes for very good time killers. i will see you at school crimson dreamer.
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Reviewed By: Tygrrlyli578 On: September 26, 2003 16:58 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Woo! This is one of the few fics that A)supercedes my ADHD, and B)i look for EVERY time i come onto mediaminer...which is far more often than any human should ever. regardless, please do continue as you said you would. i will hold you to that! sorta...kinda...until i forget to. anyway, yes, very pretty, make them screw like bunnies ^_^
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Reviewed By: CrimsonDreamer [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2003 00:33 CDT
Comment/Review:
Thank you very much for the critiques my freinds. I am going to try to keep up with this fic, unlike so many others that I let go by the wayside...things might go slow for a while, due to finals and other matters, but rest assured, the fic WILL be finished *laughs maniacally until her asthma cataches up to her and she begind to hack...* Erm...yeah, it'll get done *cough cough* |
Reviewed By: Delilah On: September 18, 2003 21:05 CDT
Comment/Review:
Yay! Poor Ken'ichi, its so hard to be surrounded by bishie vampires who engage in yaoi goodness *cackles evilly and shoves him and Cain into Shido's bed* |
Reviewed By: Shido89 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2003 22:47 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice once again my friend. ^_^ ^_^ ^_^ I really like. |
Reviewed By: Shido89 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2003 09:09 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Once again very nice. ^_^ Cant wait for more. |
Reviewed By: Shido89 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2003 17:53 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
blue OOOO, very nice. cant wait for more. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Delilah On: September 08, 2003 10:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes! Shido should get to know his brother better *nods* . . . preferrably very soon! *fluffs your pillow and urges you to write the next chapter* |
Reviewed By: shi_tiger [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2003 19:55 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
Yet another great chapter. Please keep writing more. I love the way you draw the scene so well and descriptively. |
Reviewed By: Shido89 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2003 19:41 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I love this third chapter.
^_^ write more soon. PLEASE |
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