| "The Bells" Reviews/Comments [ 52 ] |
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Reviewed By: CrimsonDreamer [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2003 00:33 CDT
Comment/Review:
Thank you very much for the critiques my freinds. I am going to try to keep up with this fic, unlike so many others that I let go by the wayside...things might go slow for a while, due to finals and other matters, but rest assured, the fic WILL be finished *laughs maniacally until her asthma cataches up to her and she begind to hack...* Erm...yeah, it'll get done *cough cough* |
Reviewed By: Delilah On: September 18, 2003 21:05 CDT
Comment/Review:
Yay! Poor Ken'ichi, its so hard to be surrounded by bishie vampires who engage in yaoi goodness *cackles evilly and shoves him and Cain into Shido's bed* |
Reviewed By: Shido89 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2003 22:47 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice once again my friend. ^_^ ^_^ ^_^ I really like. |
Reviewed By: Shido89 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2003 09:09 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Once again very nice. ^_^ Cant wait for more. |
Reviewed By: Shido89 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2003 17:53 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
blue OOOO, very nice. cant wait for more. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Delilah On: September 08, 2003 10:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes! Shido should get to know his brother better *nods* . . . preferrably very soon! *fluffs your pillow and urges you to write the next chapter* |
Reviewed By: shi_tiger [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2003 19:55 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
Yet another great chapter. Please keep writing more. I love the way you draw the scene so well and descriptively. |
Reviewed By: Shido89 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2003 19:41 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I love this third chapter.
^_^ write more soon. PLEASE |
Reviewed By: creotia_flayier [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2003 20:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i think that this just keeps getting better and better...keep up the good work...and don't let school effect your writing. |
Reviewed By: Shido89 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2003 18:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good second chapter. Write more soon. ^_^ PLEASE |
Reviewed By: Shi Tiger On: July 29, 2003 01:19 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
A great continued story to your previous fics! I want to see how the relationship grows between the three vampires in the future! Please write another chapter soon! |
Reviewed By: silverwyvern On: July 28, 2003 20:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ooo, i like this alot! please write more soon. i can't wait!! |
Reviewed By: Shido89 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2003 13:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like it very much. Write more soon. |
Reviewed By: creotia_flayier [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2003 16:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i have to tip my hat to you...that is the best one so far...thank you for persisting that i too join the club and post...so, as of this friday, people will be able to read my work. |
Reviewed By: ShiTiger On: August 06, 2003 12:44 CDT
Comment/Review:
Great chapter! So sweet! I can't wait to find out how the other vampires are going to react. Keep writing, love the yaoi! |
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