| "I Got There First" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: Vegetasama On: August 18, 2003 21:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Tofu? WHAT? That was a shocker if I ever read one. And I liked it. |
Reviewed By: dogbertcarroll On: August 12, 2003 15:49 CDT
Comment/Review:
Twisted ending worthy of the twilight zone. |
Reviewed By: chrissy w. On: July 29, 2003 15:47 CDT
Comment/Review:
write more! i can't believe nabiki did that to her sister. i need a follow up chapter. come on!! |
Reviewed By: Sano On: July 29, 2003 09:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nabiki, you tramp, you! Ha! No, I thought the ending was a shocker. I thought it was surely Ranma. |
Reviewed By: dragonlady sakura On: July 28, 2003 22:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Fanning self* Holy Crap! That's all I have to say about that. U must write more. |
Reviewed By: Jessica On: July 28, 2003 21:31 CDT
Comment/Review:
Very naughty oneshot. Very graphic. Nabiki is my all time fav and I was hoping it was Ranma, but I was shocked at who it was. Her sister would kill her. Plz do a follow up! |
Reviewed By: gx-Silver On: July 28, 2003 21:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay!! Was not expecting that! I assumed it was Ranma or Ryoga. Nice surprise. Very lemony. ^_^ |
