| "Yes Master" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: arch_angel On: September 29, 2003 02:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think ur doing a great job on the story..I just hope it is a S/K fic..lol Anyways, can't wait for ur next chapters. Keep up the good work!!!
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Reviewed By: Jedi Jaina (Jaya) On: September 15, 2003 15:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay Fluffy, your a good writer. I can talk to you here instead of at school. I'm a squadron leader *puffs chest out slightly* . I'm so proud.
Love, peace, and world domination;
~*Jaya*~ |
Title: Lotus Lauren
Reviewed By: Silent Heart [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2003 01:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Chriping crickets are aewsome; they should recive the supporting actor..or supporting bug award;...is there even such a thing? Oh well ^_^
Jaken was...himself, clueless in a very amusing way. Inuyasha was annoying as always and wow you even gave Sango lines! Don't let school and evil computers intrude on your writting!!!
Lotus Laren goes off to over throw evil,evil,evil, creative resticting school!!!! Mawmawmawmaw! |
Reviewed By: Yuki KIKI [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2003 23:13 CDT
Comment/Review:
^^ poor Jaken... ... ... *crickets chirp* ... ... Or not. SPLAT! hehehehe... Oh I can't wait to see what happens when Sessho-Maru finds out Jaken lost his precious Rin ^^^ (three eyes! Whoa!) anyhoo, great ficcie so far ^^ |
Reviewed By: Lotus Lauren On: August 02, 2003 20:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeah another chapter! Boo, too short. Please post more soon! heheh Tis fun to torture Jaken that it is! Peace ^_- |
Reviewed By: Lotus Lauren On: July 29, 2003 17:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is to all of the twenty-two jerks that have read this and have yet to review.... are so dumb that you can't just move the little mousey thing attached to the computer and type, or is that pyhsically imposible!?!? To the writter, wonderful first chapter! Is there any chance that you will contuine it anytime soon. Lov Ya ! |
