| "Drawn to the Flame" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Title: Kool
Reviewed By: Yamisbabygirl64 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2004 18:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, love how the story of how Ayane cares for Hayate. I love the setting and everything. Good story so far!
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Reviewed By: GrieverBlade On: October 07, 2004 01:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I've taken a liking to your story of Kasumi and Ryu, though I haven't played Dead of Alive, I've seen pictures of all the charcters, namely the female fighters, and they are in one simple word...HOT. I loved the one involving Kasumi and Ryu, therefore I'd love to see what you've got in mind for Ayane and Hayate. Make it cool, and the romance should be VERY interesting. Good luck!
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Reviewed By: Salvador On: October 03, 2004 21:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
I'm really interested in good stories and this one's got plenty of promise in it. I've read the story of Kasumi and Ryu previously, and now I hope that Ayame get's the same resultd with Hayate, since as far as I can see, she may have a thing for Kasumi's brother. See you soon, and more pages to come.
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Title: Hai
Reviewed By: Vidz On: March 19, 2004 04:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
SENSEI! was great sis, i loved the sparring sequence, and ayane getting all mad lol loved it!
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