Reviewed By: ...what?? On: February 29, 2004 00:32 CST
Comment/Review:
Do you not at all know how to space? It seems that you have problems with rudimentary grammar.... I wasn't capable of following it whatsoever; I advise you to redo it. It is never "Sanzo, he blah, blah blah," but "Sanzo blah, blah, blah." There were various other things that made it very hard to follow or understand for that matter. It often helps if you read over what you wrote at least once, or wait until you've passed seventh grade english....
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