| "Love Lost" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Title: Spelling oopsie
Reviewed By: Manga Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2006 00:36 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Tohru, is spelled Tohru, other than that it's great! You should keep going with this story.
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Reviewed By: inuyasha5243469 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2004 18:08 CDT
Comment/Review:
the story was enteresting but manyly it was creepy.
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Reviewed By: sexkitten On: February 13, 2004 20:08 CST
Comment/Review:
make a continuation!
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Reviewed By: Kevin ngar On: December 13, 2003 10:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey man this fanfic is gd!! make more with Tohru and Akito yeh? this fanfic rules!
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Reviewed By: cynthia On: September 11, 2003 23:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
akito seem to stay in charecter. I liked that
I really think akito and tohru make a great couple |
Reviewed By: EarthDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2003 00:08 CDT
Comment/Review:
that was really good an you kept akito in chara. Yeah !!! * gives cookies * i know it hard to keep him in chara. |
Reviewed By: Faith On: August 14, 2003 10:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a beautiful one-shot... or was it? I would love if you'd write more to it, but it's still beautiful as it is!
Akito is a great character, but to imagine Toru like that... needs some time getting used to |
Reviewed By: Apuru On: July 31, 2003 19:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this fic. Its hard to find lemon fics with an Akito Thoru pairing. Its one of my fav pairings. I was hopeing maybe you could make a part 2 to this fic. That would be so cool. You should have Hatori and the others find out about Akito and Thoru. |
