| "The Final Heart" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Title: interesting
Reviewed By: JillianChan On: September 19, 2005 03:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Since this is your first lemon I won't hate your fic due to your mistakes. one such mistake is that really you should never use the scietific names for things if you want to be erotic or romantic. Like another person has already told you, you need to work on your imagry and diction. The words you used did not created the correct atmosphere I believe was necessary in this fic. Otherwise this was a good fic, enjoyed to read it, hope you come out with more soon!
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Reviewed By: GundamJacob [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2005 23:25 CST
Comment/Review:
Holy freaking nutheads people. This is like...from the summer BEFORE last summer! And the NEXT summer is coming up soon so it'd almost be like 2 years have passed since I've started this. Okay, for the record, I'm not so pleased that people are still looking at this and judging my writing skill on it 'cause trust me I've gotten much better. But umm...yeah, this fic is pretty much dead, don't expect anything out of it seeing how TWO YEARS have passed. One more thing - I don't even know what the story of this was, so don't beg me to update now. Toodle pip and what not. -The author.
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Reviewed By: Harpy Link452 On: March 08, 2005 23:28 CST
Comment/Review:
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Lonely_Destiny [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2004 19:20 CDT
Comment/Review:
update!
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Reviewed By: WriterReborn On: January 25, 2004 13:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good theme and interesting. Horrible lack of imagery. Characters freeze during dialogue; where;s the head-shaking, shrugging, etc.?
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Reviewed By: Wind Wanderer [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2003 20:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey this is good so far, continue soon.
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Reviewed By: Billyzombie [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2003 00:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
you really suck mortal fool |
Reviewed By: Billyzombie [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2003 00:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
you really suck mortal fool |
Reviewed By: Platinum Punk [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2003 23:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You're off to a good start! And Seph is by far the greatest villian in my opinion. Hope to see more from this fic! Later!
Priss |
Reviewed By: Platinum Punk [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2003 23:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You're off to a good start! And Seph is by far the greatest villian in my opinion. Hope to see more from this fic! Later!
Priss |
