| "New Toys" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: lell [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2011 07:53 EDT
Comment/Review:
you really need to finish this. I'm dying to know what happens next!!! |
Reviewed By: Laina On: August 02, 2003 09:47 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yummmmmmmm... that was the best first chapter I've ever read!!! I can't wait till you get the next chapters out!!! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Zerianyu On: August 01, 2003 02:28 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey
Mot bad, Hah I have never read a first lemon that was ay good. I mean I have been wanting to read one like that for sometime. That was good. The only thing is that you need to space stuff out a little more. It was way good, but could have been slightly better with a little spacing. The begging was the best, for spacing wise. If you don't get what I mean or want towrite me a nasty e-mail My e-mail is Zerianyu@yahoo.com. I did not mean his to be a flame, just tryingt o help. |
Reviewed By: Zerianyu On: August 01, 2003 02:25 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey
Mot bad, Hah I have never read a first lemon that was ay good. I mean I have been wanting to read one like that for sometime. That was good. The only thing is that you need to space stuff out a little more. It was way good, but could have been slightly better with a little spacing. The begging was the best, for spacing wise. If you don't get what I mean or want towrite me a nasty e-mail My e-mail is Zerianyu@yahoo.com. I did not mean his to be a flame, just tryingt o help. |
Reviewed By: Zerianyu On: August 01, 2003 02:22 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey
Mot bad, Hah I have never read a first lemon that was ay good. I mean I have been wanting to read one like that for sometime. That was good. The only thing is that you need to space stuff out a little more. It was way good, but could have been slightly better with a little spacing. The begging was the best, for spacing wise. If you don't get what I mean or want towrite me a nasty e-mail My e-mail is Zerianyu@yahoo.com. I did not mean his to be a flame, just tryingt o help. |
Reviewed By: ian On: August 01, 2003 01:33 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
not bad for afirst time i loved it. |
