| "Don't Stay" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Title: oh NOOO not another goo fan fic writer that dosent finish thier fan fics!!!...lol
Reviewed By: ReDiCuLoUsLy_ExHaUsTeD_cAuSe_tHeSe_fAn_fIcS_aRe_rEaLlY-GoOd_lmao On: October 03, 2003 17:01 CDT
Comment/Review:
ummm are you ganna finish it...hehe cause i like this one.KeEp Up ThE GoOd FiCs...lol
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Reviewed By: SonKikyo [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2003 10:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, I hope you'll find this peice of advice somewhat helpful. Continue the story you've got going on, but place the song Somewhere I Belong and speak of most of the angst we've got going on with Vegeta. The song suits his lifestyle perfectly. Use lyrics from each LP song but have the same story going is basically what I'm saying. I hope you find that helpful because it's all I can think of. |
Reviewed By: bise b On: July 31, 2003 19:06 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was such an awsome story. but i dont think that you should stop just there. i think that you should continue the story. but that is just my opinion. bye |
Reviewed By: Sinu-Yasha On: July 31, 2003 19:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i liked it but i think that you should continue this. |
Reviewed By: M.Q. [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2003 16:18 CDT
Comment/Review:
I luv this story!!!!!! You're an awsume writer...I'm behind this 100 percent!!! *tackles* update soon!!!!!!!!! CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE!!! |
