| "Firemoth" Reviews/Comments [ 35 ] |
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Reviewed By: autumn(peg) On: November 05, 2003 19:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh my god!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Fuck its good.I was reading it for the first time Oh. Its perfect. Id give you my e-mail but Im in the middle of getting a new one. So here my home address. 16477 knollwood cinton twn. mi 48038 PPPLLLEEEAAASSSEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! write me. I need to have friends I dont have any. Please*sob*Write me.:(
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Reviewed By: Monoshiri the Mystic Tomato On: October 18, 2003 15:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
D00d, now I'm hooked. Now hurry up and update, demmit...I want to see who chewed on Kaiba-boi, and what he's gonna do when he finds out that Yuuglet is an...ahem...y'know. And when does YnY come back in? Not to mention you now own my soul for sticking a MalikxRyou reference in there. Poor Fluffy. I hope YnB hands Malik his ass for that whole "pet" thing. Poor, poor Fluffy. Did I mention I lurv WhipCracking!Isis? Some of the terms may be borrowed, but in this case it only adds to the fic. It's amazing. Pwweeeze keep writing! *uberglomps teh S&X*
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Title: Great, as usual
Reviewed By: ChibiChula [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2003 02:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello Xpyne! *waves* Just wanted to say that I've enjoyed all your collaborative works with Solitaire (all the one's I've read so far, at least), and I most definitely enjoyed this particular story. It's very rare to find AU fics that don't alter the characters personalities (more than absolutely necessary, that is), so it's wonderful to come across a story like this one. Also, while a lot of the concepts you used have probably been overdone, you still managed to bring a fresh twist to the plot that caught my interest the moment I began reading. That's not easy to do so you deserve extra credit. Especially when you managed to make Kaiba and Bakura actually working together sound believable, considering that neither of those two are exactly 'team players'. You even managed to make the story funny. I'm impressed. Hmmm... I won't even get into the fact that you're gonna eventually be writing about my favorite threesome. *grin* I do so enjoy Yugi, Yami, and Seto together. =^.^= Please continue writing this story. I might expire from curiosity if you don't. Oh... I wouldn't mind seeing an update on 'Return of the Demon' either. BTW, that comment that Bakura made in the club... That was just so wrong. LOL... I wonder what your male reviewers (assuming you have some) will say about that. *evil grin* Ok, I'll stop writing now. Keep up the good work. Bai!
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Reviewed By: chibi_yugi16 On: September 20, 2003 16:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please continue!! This is really good....when's Yami going to be back on? ^^ Can't wait for the next chapter. |
Title: LQ
Reviewed By: tLQ [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2003 09:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Xpyne! Chica! Esta MUY bueno! Yo quiero mas pronto!! x_X You made me talk in spanish!! *goes into spasms* Must...have...MORE!!! |
Reviewed By: windychan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2003 16:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, I finally know what a veep is... it'd be nice to find out what all the rest of that crap was! *pokepoke* Mooooooore! And yes, loving the sexual tension between Seto and Yuugi-kun... so cuuuute! Wai! |
Reviewed By: YamiTenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2003 16:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great fic! I've never been into the vampire kinda stuff, but this is 1 of the best fics I've ever read!! Update soon!!! |
Title: oooOOOOHHHHhhh
Reviewed By: Monsy On: September 06, 2003 23:31 CDT
Comment/Review:
This is finger lickin' good..
you have brightened up my 12:27 am
Finish soon plesase...
Yuugi is so cute too
all like 'hay im a vamppy...but not'
then Seto's like 'i love you'
and Bakura's like 'i am a sexy sexy beast'
GREATNESS |
Reviewed By: windychan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2003 15:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A twist on the vampire-ness. Loving that... Oooooo, Thief King Bakura! *Glomps* WAI! I love him! *Calms back down to coherantness* Veeery interesting. There *will* be more of this, yes? Am eagerly awaiting the next chapter of this... and Return of the Demon. ¬¬ Don't forget about RofD!!! ...And the finishing of Bite-Sized would be nice... |
Reviewed By: Kysarin [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2003 12:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Typically, I avoid AU fics like the plague, however I also read anything/everything that you guys produce. I contemplated whether or not to read it for about half a second before deciding that it would most likely be worth my time. I was not disappointed.
You're doing a great job with it, so post more! And update Bite-Sized! And RotD! You're killing me here! |
Reviewed By: Crying Forever On: August 22, 2003 23:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Totally cool! you're great with your partner AND by yourself!! i can't wait for the B/R love!! but no joey this time??? that's okay,,he was kind of a tag along...i mean i love him with the two, but thet're better by themselves!!! Make ryou a mermaid!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! just for the hell of it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Shaz On: August 20, 2003 15:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey,tis fic is pretty cool, although I generally don't read vamp fics. Keep it up I wanna see where this is going! |
Reviewed By: megumi-chan On: August 12, 2003 00:43 CDT
Comment/Review:
wow, I always love a good vampire fic, and this was exceptionally good!! ^^
Please continue!!!!
I'll...I'll...ummmmm..*stops to think* I'll give you a cookie if you do ^^
Megami-sama: Hey!! How come you never gave me a cookie ;_;
Megumi-chan: Because you never asked for one and you never did anything to deserve one ^^;
Megami-sama: Okay, how about I cook you something or do all your chores for a week?
Megumi-chan: Hmmmm, that'll work ^^
Megami-sama: Great^^ So what do I make for you?
Megumi-chan: Cookies ^^;;;
Megami-sama: You didn't have any to begin with did you -_-;;;
Megumi-chan: Nope and after you make them, I will ^^ Then I'll give you one ~_^
Megami-sama: *deeply sighs* -_-
Megumi-chan: How about this, I'll have my yami bake 4 dozen and give you one dozen. Ok? That sound good? Update while the cookies are still fresh ~_^
Bye Bye!!
*waves*
Megami-sama: *sighs* How do I get myself into these messes -_- Oh, update soon and I'll even give you megumi's share ~_^
Megumi-chan: Hey!! I heard that!! >:(
Megami-sama: hehehehehe ^^ |
Reviewed By: AuroraDragonKaya [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2003 18:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh! Oh! I remember seeing this at the contest!! ^_^
Actually, I thought it should win. But it didn't. But it should've. And I'm going around in circles, so.....
Continue it! Continue it! You really should!! Onegai!! ^,^
I don't care how many reviews you get! Finish it! Or else I'l... I'lll **stops and tries to think of an effective threat**
I'll do something!!!
Teikimon- **rolls eyes** "You'll do something? Oh, do run away Xpine. I think she might breathe!!!"
Quiet you.... |
Reviewed By: chibi_yugi16 On: August 05, 2003 18:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the best vampire fic I've ever read! I hope you continue cause I think I might have to kill someone if you don't. |
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