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"Firemoth" Reviews/Comments [ 35 ]
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 Reviewed By: windychan [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 09, 2003 16:26 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Well, I finally know what a veep is... it'd be nice to find out what all the rest of that crap was! *pokepoke* Mooooooore! And yes, loving the sexual tension between Seto and Yuugi-kun... so cuuuute! Wai!
 Reviewed By: YamiTenshi [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 07, 2003 16:00 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Great fic! I've never been into the vampire kinda stuff, but this is 1 of the best fics I've ever read!! Update soon!!!
 Title: oooOOOOHHHHhhh
Reviewed By: Monsy  On: September 06, 2003 23:31 CDT
Comment/Review:
This is finger lickin' good.. you have brightened up my 12:27 am Finish soon plesase... Yuugi is so cute too all like 'hay im a vamppy...but not' then Seto's like 'i love you' and Bakura's like 'i am a sexy sexy beast' GREATNESS
 Reviewed By: windychan [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 03, 2003 15:23 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
A twist on the vampire-ness. Loving that... Oooooo, Thief King Bakura! *Glomps* WAI! I love him! *Calms back down to coherantness* Veeery interesting. There *will* be more of this, yes? Am eagerly awaiting the next chapter of this... and Return of the Demon. ¬¬ Don't forget about RofD!!! ...And the finishing of Bite-Sized would be nice...
 Reviewed By: Kysarin [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 31, 2003 12:05 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Typically, I avoid AU fics like the plague, however I also read anything/everything that you guys produce. I contemplated whether or not to read it for about half a second before deciding that it would most likely be worth my time. I was not disappointed. You're doing a great job with it, so post more! And update Bite-Sized! And RotD! You're killing me here!
 Reviewed By: Crying Forever  On: August 22, 2003 23:26 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Totally cool! you're great with your partner AND by yourself!! i can't wait for the B/R love!! but no joey this time??? that's okay,,he was kind of a tag along...i mean i love him with the two, but thet're better by themselves!!! Make ryou a mermaid!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! just for the hell of it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 Reviewed By: Shaz  On: August 20, 2003 15:12 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Hey,tis fic is pretty cool, although I generally don't read vamp fics. Keep it up I wanna see where this is going!
 Reviewed By: megumi-chan  On: August 12, 2003 00:43 CDT
Comment/Review:
wow, I always love a good vampire fic, and this was exceptionally good!! ^^
Please continue!!!!
I'll...I'll...ummmmm..*stops to think* I'll give you a cookie if you do ^^

Megami-sama: Hey!! How come you never gave me a cookie ;_;
Megumi-chan: Because you never asked for one and you never did anything to deserve one ^^;
Megami-sama: Okay, how about I cook you something or do all your chores for a week?
Megumi-chan: Hmmmm, that'll work ^^
Megami-sama: Great^^ So what do I make for you?
Megumi-chan: Cookies ^^;;;
Megami-sama: You didn't have any to begin with did you -_-;;;
Megumi-chan: Nope and after you make them, I will ^^ Then I'll give you one ~_^
Megami-sama: *deeply sighs* -_-

Megumi-chan: How about this, I'll have my yami bake 4 dozen and give you one dozen. Ok? That sound good? Update while the cookies are still fresh ~_^

Bye Bye!!

*waves*
Megami-sama: *sighs* How do I get myself into these messes -_- Oh, update soon and I'll even give you megumi's share ~_^

Megumi-chan: Hey!! I heard that!! >:(
Megami-sama: hehehehehe ^^
 Reviewed By: AuroraDragonKaya [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 11, 2003 18:36 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Oh! Oh! I remember seeing this at the contest!! ^_^

Actually, I thought it should win. But it didn't. But it should've. And I'm going around in circles, so.....

Continue it! Continue it! You really should!! Onegai!! ^,^

I don't care how many reviews you get! Finish it! Or else I'l... I'lll **stops and tries to think of an effective threat**
I'll do something!!!

Teikimon- **rolls eyes** "You'll do something? Oh, do run away Xpine. I think she might breathe!!!"

Quiet you....
 Reviewed By: chibi_yugi16  On: August 05, 2003 18:15 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This is the best vampire fic I've ever read! I hope you continue cause I think I might have to kill someone if you don't.
 Reviewed By: Soulrio  On: August 02, 2003 23:56 CDT
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I have to admit, I laughed almost the entire way through this fic. I found the sarcastic/witty humor halarious. I hope you will continue this.
Soulrio
PS: Nice job on the characterization, it's not often that I see a Kaiba *and* a Bakura in the same fic that are actually portrayed realistically. Nice breath of fresh air. ~grins~
 Reviewed By: AlphaSlave [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 02, 2003 14:27 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Good Job, my friend! It rocks Tabi like all Soli & Xpyne works of art, weather done as a team or solo. NOW HURRY UP WITH ROTD! xD. I'm liking the whole Kura and Seto working together thing. They complement each other well.

AND PEGSY IS A PEDOPHILE!

I had to get that out. CONTINUE! NOW! The Alpha commands of it!


..and the word you are thinking of is "kitty".
 Reviewed By: super_JM [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 01, 2003 20:14 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
cool story so far can't wait for more
 Reviewed By: Ravana  On: July 31, 2003 21:59 CDT
Comment/Review:
I like it. I mean I like anything either/both of you work on but I really like this one a lot even though I normally don't like vampire fanfics but well I'm gushing so long story short great job and I hope you write more
 Reviewed By: Icz  On: July 31, 2003 21:49 CDT
Comment/Review:
Always happy to see more from you two. Now if you'd only finish RotD and BS....

And vampires are ALWAYS good!


Icz
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