| "Firemoth" Reviews/Comments [ 35 ] |
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Reviewed By: DemonandGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2004 17:51 CDT
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You updated! So happy. ^-^ Are you going to put more Ryou and Yami? Are you? Are you? Please say yes! Well, anyway, just update soon!
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Reviewed By: Nasiki On: January 17, 2004 20:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi!!! Te...he...he...That was sooooo goood. I'm a huage fan...read all your(and Solitare's) fics...all of which I loved! I been to all the different sites and orignally found yous on fanfiction.net. Though I normally am on adultfanfiction.net(I've read your fics there too) This is my 1st time to actually review you so this is most likly the 1st time you've heard of me...(I also go by DarkHell) This has got to be my favorite fic you've done! It's so hard to find good authors but you are one of them! I love your writing style, your pairings, everything about your stories, and am sooooooo glad you write vampys, it's almost impossible to find good ones. PLEASE PLEASE write the next chapter soooooooooooooooon I will wait...but thats sort of hard so, WRITE!!! WRITE!!! WRITE!!! V"-*V []smile[]
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Reviewed By: D. Motomiya [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2004 21:35 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. This is definately one of my fav. fics! Please continue soon!
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Title: vampire lips
Reviewed By: vampire lips [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2004 20:15 CST
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Tuna's not that bad!!!!!
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Title: vampirelips
Reviewed By: vampire lips [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2004 16:51 CST
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When I was reading the dream part it was just...I donno...overwelming! I loved how you took it as it was really happining. And if I'm starting to annoy you with all my reviws just tell me. And I hope you don't think I was being rude by asking you to read my fan/fic in my last review. Sorry. Still LOVE your work. and even if you don't get alot of reveiws IT IS ALWAYS WORTH IT!!!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Vampirelips [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2003 17:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YOUR DRIVING ME CRAZY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I can't sleep.You must contiue.I know you got other things to do but ya' can't leave us hanin'. Or if you arnt going to do this at LEAST go to vampire god and read the first chpter.You two were what got me into writing.Please tell me what you think.AND BE HONIST.I want to know.*^_^* You 2 are:sob:My heros.
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Reviewed By: obs seto On: November 17, 2003 19:42 CST
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:obs seto:I have to hurry and ask this cuz autumn dosnt know I here but...Why do you say ?oh godsinsted of oh god? Just cureous.OH no I think shes comming g2g! :runs off in hope that autumn didn't see her:
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Reviewed By: DreamChaser668 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2003 17:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ooooo very cool! I love the plot, its very intellegent, very unique too. Keep writing, this is coming to be a really awesome story!
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Reviewed By: autumn(peg) On: November 06, 2003 14:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
allthose 10s make them x 5 I told you Id do it again:) Any way I had an Idea. how about you make mariks pet joey! dont use it if you dont want to or if you have another idea but I thought it was good for all of the tention(sexual that is)going around. Basicly MEOW! Im loven the story. Write mor before I go nuts (or worse) I think I might write another rivew after this one It rally fun. And if it helps you write any faster Ill write another one!!!!!!!!!!!!!! so again... PPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE EEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!! (Ill stop doing that) Write more. (I lied) PPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPLLLLLLLLLLLLEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSEEEEEEEE!!! *sob* I love it so much
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Reviewed By: autumn(peg) On: November 06, 2003 14:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAS SSSSSSSSSSSSSSSEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! write more or else Ill have to write so many reviews that youll be beging me to stop!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Im addicted to it Ill read it over and over. And put A LOT! of sexual tetion beetween kaiba an yuugi. Its gut who they are and you should have had kaiba notice that Yuugi was hard! PPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAA AAAAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!(gasp)!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Write more*sob* (in a quieter voice)Please*sob*
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Reviewed By: autumn(peg) On: November 05, 2003 19:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh my god!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Fuck its good.I was reading it for the first time Oh. Its perfect. Id give you my e-mail but Im in the middle of getting a new one. So here my home address. 16477 knollwood cinton twn. mi 48038 PPPLLLEEEAAASSSEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! write me. I need to have friends I dont have any. Please*sob*Write me.:(
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Reviewed By: Monoshiri the Mystic Tomato On: October 18, 2003 15:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
D00d, now I'm hooked. Now hurry up and update, demmit...I want to see who chewed on Kaiba-boi, and what he's gonna do when he finds out that Yuuglet is an...ahem...y'know. And when does YnY come back in? Not to mention you now own my soul for sticking a MalikxRyou reference in there. Poor Fluffy. I hope YnB hands Malik his ass for that whole "pet" thing. Poor, poor Fluffy. Did I mention I lurv WhipCracking!Isis? Some of the terms may be borrowed, but in this case it only adds to the fic. It's amazing. Pwweeeze keep writing! *uberglomps teh S&X*
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Title: Great, as usual
Reviewed By: ChibiChula [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2003 02:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello Xpyne! *waves* Just wanted to say that I've enjoyed all your collaborative works with Solitaire (all the one's I've read so far, at least), and I most definitely enjoyed this particular story. It's very rare to find AU fics that don't alter the characters personalities (more than absolutely necessary, that is), so it's wonderful to come across a story like this one. Also, while a lot of the concepts you used have probably been overdone, you still managed to bring a fresh twist to the plot that caught my interest the moment I began reading. That's not easy to do so you deserve extra credit. Especially when you managed to make Kaiba and Bakura actually working together sound believable, considering that neither of those two are exactly 'team players'. You even managed to make the story funny. I'm impressed. Hmmm... I won't even get into the fact that you're gonna eventually be writing about my favorite threesome. *grin* I do so enjoy Yugi, Yami, and Seto together. =^.^= Please continue writing this story. I might expire from curiosity if you don't. Oh... I wouldn't mind seeing an update on 'Return of the Demon' either. BTW, that comment that Bakura made in the club... That was just so wrong. LOL... I wonder what your male reviewers (assuming you have some) will say about that. *evil grin* Ok, I'll stop writing now. Keep up the good work. Bai!
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Reviewed By: chibi_yugi16 On: September 20, 2003 16:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please continue!! This is really good....when's Yami going to be back on? ^^ Can't wait for the next chapter. |
Title: LQ
Reviewed By: tLQ [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2003 09:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Xpyne! Chica! Esta MUY bueno! Yo quiero mas pronto!! x_X You made me talk in spanish!! *goes into spasms* Must...have...MORE!!! |
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