| "Love potion #9" Reviews/Comments [ 19 ] |
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Reviewed By: Lady Kickass [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2003 13:18 CDT
Comment/Review:
I really like your style of writing. Nice to find and a pleasure to read. You make the descriptions and the story flow really well, and I'm impressed by this overall. Nice job. Keep up the good work. |
Reviewed By: Thorne [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2003 00:45 CDT
Comment/Review:
Excellent first chapter. I can't wait to see what you have planned for the rest of the story.
Keep up the good work. |
Reviewed By: Maple On: August 01, 2003 13:09 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic looks rather interesting! Will it be a Yohji X Aya? *keeps fingers crossed and hoping that it is* ^O^ |
Reviewed By: CheetaCatTheUnsane On: August 01, 2003 12:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Not bad! What you've got so far looks really interesting. A couple spelling/grammarical errors, but over all, very well done. ^^ I won't always comment, but if you do continue writing, I'll be reading! |
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