| "Love potion #9" Reviews/Comments [ 19 ] |
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Reviewed By: Gravedigger17 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2004 23:25 CST
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While I can truly say that this is one of the most... unique... fics out there... I have something else to say about it...... WRITE MORE OF THE STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I want to see what happens in the end! You can't just leave it HANGING there!!! please write more?
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Reviewed By: toniq [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2004 19:41 CST
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Oh wow hehe very nice lemon... There's nothing like a horny Aya!
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Title: ^_^
Reviewed By: Tygrrlyli578 On: January 10, 2004 21:58 CST
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The crowd's fic-lust has been sated, for now. Woo! Can't wait for more, this is a really entertaining one ^_^ Happy day!
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Reviewed By: Theresa On: December 13, 2003 23:54 CST
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This was great!
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Title: disappointed
Reviewed By: Tygrrlyli578 On: December 10, 2003 21:26 CST
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where for art thou new chapters?!!? i read this when it first started (and stupidly didn't review) and i'm reading it again, and there needs to be more of it!!! PLEASE!
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Reviewed By: fuji On: August 22, 2003 01:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was deffinently interesting...........but really good yeah really really good:D!!! |
Reviewed By: bat On: August 19, 2003 20:01 CDT
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yes oh yes this can only get better |
Reviewed By: Chanchan On: August 19, 2003 10:31 CDT
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I don't do ratings. If I like, I like and this I like very much. Aya as a drugged up slut. Droolicious. Please write more. |
Reviewed By: MM On: August 12, 2003 11:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice story, Never seen one with one of the boys getting a love potion before. So, will Aya realize and regret what he's done, or will he just move on to the next teammate? I'll be waiting for the next chapteR! |
Reviewed By: Miko No Hoshi [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2003 17:44 CDT
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Aya and Yohji, always good. Great idea for a fic, OOC or not. One complaint, too many platitudes with the lemon: "rained kisses", plunder his mouth", etc--original lines are much realistic. Other than that, great job, especially the dialouge and Yohji's interpretations of Aya's looks. Hope to see more. (Must insert random thought, sorry. Wouldn't it be halarious for Aya to get to Omi and kind of get turned around himself...hehe, domme Omi, hehe... Okay, I'll just go now...) |
Reviewed By: deunan On: August 05, 2003 11:15 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Oooh, that was really fun!
It's amusing to see Aya like that.
Hee, I hope you keep it AyaxYouji, that was great! |
Reviewed By: Xellas M. [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2003 13:13 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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This is so much fun - can't wait to see what (or who) Aya does next! hehe |
Reviewed By: Koji-chan On: August 02, 2003 17:56 CDT
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Oi^^...good, really really good ^_^...I like this horny Aya XD ^_~! And your Yohji x Aya lemon was nice...though I like Yohji seme more ^-^, but it surely wasn't Ayas last "act" with Yohji, right ^_~?
So, keep going...I want to read more of it soon!!!
Ja
Koji-chan |
Reviewed By: Cory On: August 02, 2003 17:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 2 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
Horny-ness o_o like yohji doesn't care that Aya is totally OOC? btw LadyKickass, another Weiss Constant: Yohji wears no underwear XD |
Reviewed By: Maple On: August 02, 2003 13:52 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*pouts* And I was so hoping that it would be a Yohji X Aya. Hahaha but I still enjoyed it! More! More! |
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