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| "Of The Past Forward" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: Fan Fic Critic No. 1 On: October 31, 2003 19:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, this is real deep. I read most of the prologue, and skimmed through chapter 1, but even then I can tell that this guy's a genius. His writing style is almost unique, I wonder why he is wasting his time writing FanFics when he could just go out and write a book and make tons of money. One especially creative aspect is the emphasis on Psychic power, and the Stones, instead of the Millennium Items and the Shadow Powers. This is truly good work, I am sorry about the nine for spelling, I didn't read more than 1.25 pgs max, so I just put an estimate. Ok, keep up the good work, you will soon be able to sell off your work. However, I would like it better if it was not yaoi (hence the nine.) You could even have a fandom if people could go in-depth like this, if they could fathom the full meaning of this text! I have taken more than my share of space, so now I will leave you to your most intelligent musings.
| Reviewed By: Lessie On: September 13, 2003 22:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please continue! I love it! Especially Malik. *glomps him* | Reviewed By: Ki-la-le On: September 08, 2003 19:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed this. It is filled with originality and description. I liked the poem and the style of writing. I am impressed with the fanfic.
I am also happy to see Malik as the main character instead of Yuugi, as Malik is my fav character. I am even happier to see Bakura paired with him, since he's my other fav character. I also love the plot, about these jewels...that are around Malik.
The past sequence with the woman was interesting, and the time jump was actually good to use at the time.
I cannot wait until updation of this. I shall be checking each day for continuation. Tonight you have received an admirer who shall not forget this fanfic. |
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