| "Chances" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Reviewed By: Liei On: September 15, 2004 21:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was great. It was long...but still awesome. Very orginal and possible to boot! Great job.
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Reviewed By: AnimeDuneJediElf [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2004 17:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thsi story is both touching and sad. Great job! *|Mari|*
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Reviewed By: AnimeDuneJediElf [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2004 17:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thsi story is both touching and sad. Great job! *|Mari|*
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Reviewed By: AnimeDuneJediElf [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2004 17:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thsi story is both touching and sad. Great job! *|Mari|*
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Reviewed By: AnimeDuneJediElf [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2004 17:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thsi story is both touching and sad. Great job! *|Mari|*
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Reviewed By: AnimeDuneJediElf [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2004 22:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thsi story is both touching and sad. Great job! *|Mari|*
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Title: You made me cry!
Reviewed By: srusse87 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2003 21:20 CDT
Comment/Review:
Thank God! I think you are an incredibly talented writer, but man there were some seriously tense moments in that story. I was punching my desk in places! LOL I'm so glad you didn't do anything bad to Heero, I don't mind a little angst but I need a happy ending. *chuckle* Anyway, just wanted you to know that anyone who can move me to tears and anger is a really exceptional author.
-srusse87 |
Reviewed By: The Firefaery [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2003 02:14 CDT
Comment/Review:
Aww...*bawls* that was great! I loved it, really. I think, though, after all the build-up towards the surgery and the possible consequences, there was a little bit of a let down. It was like...oh, he's okay... ^^ Other than that, I thought it was a great piece. Keep up the good work!
^The Firefaery^ |
Reviewed By: Bishoonenlover [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2003 13:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
I'm so glad you didn't kill off Heero.A while ago there was two story's I read on the same day back to back that were extremely good but were bittersweet that made me nearly cry.I can't help it death story's alway's put's me in a depressed mood.This was such a good story I liked it very much...I just wish I'd stop thinking about those other two.I mean FIVE year's of marriage and SEVENTY year's of lonelyness,not to mention by consequenced it was done to 'Just Communication' were she/he wrote the english word's AHHH get it out of my head!*Goes into a corner,get's into a ball and cries like a bitch.* |
Reviewed By: Ita-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2003 07:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AAAAAAAwwwwwwwwwww Maaaaaaaaannnnnnn,...*sob,sob*.....this fic of yours Toooooooottttaaallllyyyyyyyyyy makes me bawl my eyes out,.....*sob,sob*...i can't stop Crrrryyyyiinnnngggggggg,........Waaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh,.....*sniffles,sniffles*.....thank goodness you didn't kill-of heero,...*sniffles*.....poor baby,...*sniffles*....i'm envious of your good writing skills,...if only i can write half this good,....Siiiiiiggggghhhhhh,....oh well,...some people are just born writers i supposed,....well,...keep-up the good work kay,...till next time,...Jaaaaaaaaaaaaa and Gaaaaaaannnnnnbbaaattttttteeeeeeeee-Neee!!^.~!! |
Reviewed By: MookieNH [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2003 00:57 CDT
Comment/Review:
I actually voted for this fic in the Summer Jubilee contest - how nice that you pulled 2nd place!
I read it again, it was that good, and even after knowing how everything turns out, I still got all teary-eyed reading it.
You have a real way of portraying the emotions between Duo and Heero, and that's what makes the stories capture and keep my attention. And there is just something intimate about Duo's calling Heero "Ro" - I don't know what it is, but it just shows that they are really close.
Congratulations, and thanks for such a touching story (with a few steamy scenes)! |
Reviewed By: Yira On: August 01, 2003 21:20 CDT
Comment/Review:
>o< Oh this fic rocked! It's amazing how many of the Gundam Wing songs go with it, too. "Flying Away" "White Reflection" "Last Impression"...I think there was one or two more..
The theme song during one of the more steamy scenes ^_~ I would have laughed my ass off if I'd been listening to "Just Communication" while they were having at it in the rain.
You're an awesome writer. I love your style and most of your story lines. You have quickly become one of my favorite fanfic writers. You'll let us know if you publish something original, won't you? I'm sure I'll like that, too. XD
Oooh! Another song that goes with it (and a favorite of mine) "Tooi Kono Machi de" which is a Cardcaptor Sakura song. It's really good and I'd recommend it for a download. ^0^ |
Reviewed By: Dyna On: August 01, 2003 20:43 CDT
Comment/Review:
Wow! A very nice, long read. Very touching and written very well. |
