Reviewed By: Rogue On: August 02, 2003 00:12 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I really like how you added the preludes to this story. I've read this story on shoujoai.com but it was unfinished so I hope you update soon. |