"Only for One Night" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: Descendant [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2003 02:44 CST Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: This story is really good. Too bad, I wanted to hear Barett's reaction to seeing them! hehehe..I still love Tifa/Cloud pairings, and I am happy that I stumbled across your story. You said this was your first lemon?! Or did I read that somewhere else? Must've been a mistake. It was excellent. -Descendant
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Reviewed By: D Hell [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2003 13:35 CDT Comment/Review: TWO HOURS???????? God, that's a short time for writing a fic...but it isn't so long...
And it's good. |
Reviewed By: DryCleaner [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2003 02:04 CDT Comment/Review: thank you so much, it means a lot to me. i know it wasn't detailed at all, i refuse to read over.. because i'm not a porn writer.. hehe. but, i tried.. i did it in two hours. thanks! :3 |
Reviewed By: tugs On: August 02, 2003 13:28 CDT Comment/Review: it was good for your first hentai... i would've gone into a little more detail... or given it a little more plot. it was good though! |