| "Strange Love" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Title: coool...
Reviewed By: jayjem On: April 04, 2005 02:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's great! It's fine and cool. But...THe thing that bothers me most is the pairing...I...don't..err...It's fine...No worries! I just wish the pairing is Eilie and Riou...Or Kasumi and Mcdohl...@_@ ^_-
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Reviewed By: Saber_Lightning [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2004 06:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
sorry, but this would have been a great story but the plot was sudden and a lot of OOC
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Reviewed By: Lina Inverse [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2004 22:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
First of all, this is looking really interesting and I'd love to read more. But no story is perfect, and yours has an obvious (but easily fixed) flaw. Your spelling and grammar is atrocious, and I honestly don't see how in the hell any other the other reviewers can give you good scores for it. Good scores for everything else, you deserve, but PLEASE get a beta reader!
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Reviewed By: evil squirrel of newark On: May 02, 2004 17:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
reasons are obvious. update man! please??? umm..Still Time? nevertheless, UPDATE!!
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Reviewed By: tikko411 On: May 02, 2004 17:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
ey! try postin this in fanfiction.net. people usually visit that site almost all the time. update soon!
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Reviewed By: evil squirrel of newark On: May 02, 2004 17:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
reasons are obvious. update man! please??? umm..Still Time? nevertheless, UPDATE!!
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Reviewed By: Kaiji On: September 05, 2003 18:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice, cute fic. dareka ga sutete shimatta..=>
I ORDER YOU TO CONTINUE!!! please? |
