| "What If" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] |
Reviewed By: Brehonna On: October 04, 2003 18:30 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I looooooooved it! You should definitely write another chapter to it. Also, try to make the scenes between Vash and Meryl a little moer descriptive(if you know what I mean!)
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Title: A Transformation
Reviewed By: ceciliaa On: October 01, 2003 08:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this story! please update soon. you must update soon please. pritty please with suger on top. lol. ^-^
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