| "Thin Red Line" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: black beauty On: January 11, 2004 21:23 CST
Comment/Review:
I like happy endings. Keep up the good job.
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Reviewed By: Yira On: January 10, 2004 00:58 CST
Comment/Review:
Okay, I get it o_o; There will be more chapters. The story's good and I did like this chapter. However, the repetitive "there will be a next time," "we must prepare for the next attack," gritted on my nerves a bit. I understand that it was needed but maybe not that much? I'm looking forward to the next chapter ^_^
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Reviewed By: Soon to be World Renown Gracie On: December 13, 2003 22:30 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
argh!!! STOP IT! NO MORE CLIFFIES!!! PLEEEAAASSEEE UPDATE!!!!
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Reviewed By: Gab On: December 07, 2003 20:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is great and must continue. Where are you???????
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: August 20, 2003 21:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
What a cliffhanger... This fic is sweet and interesting. Update soon and keep up the *good* job. |
