| "Deep Cold Darkness" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: Izandria On: November 04, 2005 08:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hope your father gets well and that you may have time to continue writing. For starters you r fic is really creative. Your english is wonderful, you only had a few typos and a few spelling mistakes, but your sentence structure is wonderful. I have to admit you write better than most people. (myself included) I really look forward to reading the finished product of this fic one day. But take your time and do what you need to first. For if readers truly like it they will stick with you and read it even if you don't update for another two years.
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Reviewed By: arovak On: August 02, 2003 19:45 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hey i like the story its a little confusing but i think i get most of it. anyways i cant wait to read more! |
Reviewed By: kitkat On: August 02, 2003 14:26 CDT
Comment/Review:
hi! i must agree the beggining was a bit strange but things got clearer when i read the last sentence of first chapter... and i liked it a lot, specially because this time is someone from the past (and someone diferent from "ours" saiyajins) that comes to the present.
i'm waiting for more. |
