"Red Lantern" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Title: happy cows Reviewed By: HannaShields [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2004 19:18 CDT Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: hiya i am working on a cyborg 009 fanfic about how three sailor scouts become cyborgs but i need ideas if ya have any contact me keep on writing and please update soon Luv your storys bye!!!!!
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Title: luv ya storys Reviewed By: HannaShields [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2004 23:17 CDT Comment/Review: it is so cool i love this story and a bullet in the dark that is way tight poor inu *sniffsniff* oh and please update !!!
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Reviewed By: Silver Dimes On: March 19, 2004 18:23 CST Comment/Review: this is really a great story. especially since most romance stories have boundless love (y'know, room for relationship), but when you stick two people in a caste (sp?) system, it changes entirely. very interesting- I applaud you! but seriously, four months is a veeerry long time to not update.. we're all dying for a new chapter! please update soon! ... happy cows :)
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Reviewed By: Julitica [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2004 20:08 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: please continue
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Reviewed By: InuKitsuneMiko(sowwy im not signed in!) On: November 02, 2003 14:47 CST Comment/Review: hehe... HAPPY COWS!!! ive always wanted to say that...>.> anyways, im glad u updated and next time can u say my name at the end of the chapter? nobody ever does that for me and it makes me feel unimportant... hey what's ur favorite little smily? myns these 2: ^_^ and 0-_-
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Reviewed By: residentevilgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2003 21:54 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: I love this fic! Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: InuKitsuneMiko [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2003 18:25 CDT Comment/Review: HI! I like this story 2! Please make this a kag/inu fic!!! eewwww... she slept with naraku... >.
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Reviewed By: Silver Talons [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2003 21:42 CDT Comment/Review: Sayo I think is Rin and the Master is Naraku please update soon! I love it! get yasha and kag together! ja ne- silver talons
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Reviewed By: Aurora_thorn [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2003 18:02 CDT Comment/Review: Errr... (looks at review below) I don't plan on killing you if you don't update soon, but I'll be extreemly po'ed if you don't. ^.^ Udate soon please.
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Reviewed By: Hell's lil Bitch On: September 21, 2003 02:53 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: i gave u a 9 4 writing too slow. but other wise i would have given u 10. anywayz HURRY THE HELL UP BEFORE I JUMP UR ASS AND KILL IT!!!!> |
Reviewed By: update On: September 20, 2003 11:50 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I love your fict please continue. |
Reviewed By: Mai On: August 03, 2003 13:22 CDT Comment/Review: Nice idea. Please continue. :) |
Reviewed By: Kirisame [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2003 14:51 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Oh , I loved this movie !!
Raise the Red Lantern is Zhang Yimou 's masterpiece ! (I think...)
It's so beautiful it hurts ...And Gong Li is really great as Song Lian.
It's a wonderful adaptation of 'Wives and Concubines' by Su Tong.
Anyway , back to your fic :
Kikyo is perfect in Cao Cuifen !!
I loved your idea !!
Personally, I think that know you've settled things, you should let go of the movie plot, and let your own plot kick in ( 'coz like you said, the end is tooooo sad)... and start developing things (You know, like showing Kagome's feelings... well, you know, stuff... ^^)
Take your time !
'Coz you've got a very good idea, you should go further in the character psychology (I think ).
Make it good !
I believe in you !
*waiting for chapter 2 ^^*
Kirisame |