Reviewed By: mburns31 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2003 22:07 CDT
Comment/Review:
Not bad. The only line I had a problem with was "I would rip myself open and bleed into her soul, just to expose my feelings to her". I realize it's from the song, but it just seemed out of place. The story also seemed a bit rushed, but not too badly.
Overall, a good story. |
