Reviewed By: Mikomiko On: September 18, 2003 09:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 3 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was... okay. It could have been longer and had more details. And you really could have done without Duo. He seemed thrown in just for the purpose of being death and randomly being in love with Crawford. It seemed like you could have chosen any random pair to replace them. Actually, while I was reading the fanfic, all I could think was that, oddly enough, Farfarello would have been a better choice (I mean, think about it! Dante's inferno. The demon named Farfarello who stays in... I forget which ring of hell. It's expected, but at least it fits within the context of his character and is in the weiss continuum.) Oh well. It's your fanfic! You can take my advice or no. Either way, I'd like to see some continuation! |
