| "On a Leash" Reviews/Comments [ 287 ] |
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Reviewed By: name in review On: June 24, 2004 17:37 CDT
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LoL. Inuyasha's not happy bout this little detail.LoL. Poor Inuyasha has to become a dog again. Miroku is still grabbing butts too. LoL I liked how you tied them all into the story like the original story. They're all trying to defeat Naraku. Cept Sesshy, he's different. But good different. Anyways. LOVE THE STORY! KEEP GOING! Aiko_is_a_Miko
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Title: I LOVE YOU
Reviewed By: IfICouldMArryInuyashaIWould On: June 24, 2004 15:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Can I just say that you are AWESOME. You're the same age as me, and you capture all of the characters perfectly!!! Every time I see the big red NEW next to this fiction, I FLIP OUT!! If there was a fan club for you, I'd be president. Hey, why don't I start one? Hmm, something to think about. Anyways, HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!! Ja ne! ~I.I.C.M.I.I.W P.S.- So-called "pointless" fluff in stories is my favorite kind of fluff, even better than marshmallow fluff on fluff'n'nutter sandwiches and cotton candy fluff, and waaaaay better than dryer lint fluff. Again, ja ne!!!
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Title: pleeeease UPDATE!!!?
Reviewed By: IfICouldMarryInuyashaIWould On: June 21, 2004 09:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I keep seeing the big yellow UPDATE next to the title of your fiction, and I get exceite because I think it's a new one, but nope, still chapter 18. I LOVE THIS FICTION!!! I also love your one shot Soil, Seeds, and Water. Keep writing!!!
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Title: Love it!
Reviewed By: ssp51201 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2004 17:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, what a great story! I love it, and I'm glad that Inuyasha is now back to his original form. This story is definitely original, and I think you have an awesome imagination! I'm looking forward to the next chapter! Ja ne!
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Reviewed By: Inuyasha_For_Ever [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2004 21:48 CDT
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yay!!!!! awesome chapter!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Queen Klu [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2004 21:37 CDT
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ummmmm... maybe this was just me, but that fluff was kinda pointless even for fluff. even tho i can't wait until Mom walks in on them in bed! BWAHAHAHAHA!! i'm demented.
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Title: Eat good fish!
Reviewed By: Fuyumiko [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2004 19:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter! Though reading it right after reading 'Rules of Acquisition' felt really weird >.
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Reviewed By: Aiko (2 lazy 2 login) On: June 17, 2004 18:28 CDT
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This was a cute chapter! lol. When's Inuyasha gonna kiss her already? lol Arigato! Aiko_Is_A_Miko
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Reviewed By: HAILY On: June 16, 2004 20:54 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is turing out great! Good job so far!
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Reviewed By: HAILY On: June 16, 2004 19:21 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story!!!!!
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Reviewed By: FallenAngel1990 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2004 16:36 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love uour fic. This is a very creative idea. FallenAngel1990
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Title: Bravo!
Reviewed By: Aiko_Is_A_Miko [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2004 00:21 CDT
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Very, very, very, very, very good! Inuyasha needs his mouth washed out! Such language he uses around his love! lol. Thanks for the updates!
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Reviewed By: Queen Klu [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2004 22:53 CDT
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wow! i was a tad bit scared you'd botch the whole "omg, my dog's a hanyou" thing, but you did alright! there are things i guess i would have focussed more on, like...didn't 'Taisho' kiss her? i can't remember, maybe that was just wishful thinking on my part. oh, well, too lazy to go back and check noo! Um, chappy 2. It was really great, and i'm glad you didn't have Kagome really flipping out when he got huffy over her accusing him of being jealous. i mean, he's a guy, right? guys CAN'T admit they like some one....at least, not guys as stubborn as Inu-Yasha. i think i'm done now, have i talked enough?? toodles!
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Reviewed By: monkeymary89 not logged in On: June 14, 2004 07:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
DON"T SCREAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM!!!! Please this is NOT going too fast. If anything it's not going fast enough. I can't get enough of this story. It's like an addiction. Really. I'm getting the shakes from not gettting enough. *falls over* Come on this is THE best story ever. It's original funny romantic exciting *goes on ranting for the next 15 minutes* And it never ceases to surprise me! I love the story so don't doubt yourself!!!!!!! *jumps up and down* Schools out for summer! Schools out forever! Yes, this story is the best. Keep it coming! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Shi 345 On: June 13, 2004 19:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked this story! Pease update soon. I can't wait to see what happens when Kagome screams.
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