Reviewed By:Mimiheart [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2003 08:03 CST Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 3 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10 Overall Rating: 8 of 10
Comment/Review: You have the beginnings of a good story here. You just need to read your work before you submit it. There are some typos that make the entire story impossible to read. Like this:"and the darker eye ciir abd deotg in voice" Just look over it and use a spell checker to make it more readable, and you'll make many people happy!
