Title: Is this the last one?
Reviewed By: AmyAnderson45 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2003 08:33 CDT
Comment/Review:
Wow, I must say you do love to write! The only thing is that your chapters are so short and I just noticed that you have a squiggle in between the sections or something. (It took me this long to figure out! What is wrong with me?) Anyway, I hope your not trying to make it appear as if you have a lot of chapters. A story or fanfiction is not about the total number of your word count or how many chapters you have. It's about quality, creativity, style, and orginality (which is the same thing.) You did do a little of character personalities and some traits. Even though many of the readers already know about the places. Give more...details. I'm trying to figure out what words to say. I've never read and reviewed four fanfics in one day before or was it five? Actually, I don't review much at all. Also, the dialogue even though I'm not that good in that department is kinda lacking...no needs more development. I think my brain cells are fried for the moment but if you need any help whatsoever call me--I mean e-mail me. Sorry, but it seems that I have to leave for the time being. Continue writing, like you have and just practice. Oh, one thing though. It's always useful to work on one story at a time. If you write a story and never finish it then what's the point if you write another one that will never be finished either and so on and so on? Do you get my point? Yeah, I thought so...um anyway good luck to you and don't give up. Eventually, you'll get the flair for it--I mean the knack for it:-) |
