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| "Dissimilar" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] | Reviewed By: Hi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2004 21:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg...i haven't reviewed a mediaminner fic *ever* (which is sad..) but your fic deserves it. I love how Daisuke is talking to Ken, even without really "talking"..i love the personalities, the way there's subtle interaction, suggestion... and my god i *LOVE* tha Daiken ;3 nto to be crude... but I hope Daisuke get's to "be with" Ken soon. Please continue-it's so hard to find sucha worthwhile fic~
| Reviewed By: Bird of Fire (don't feel like signing in) On: August 30, 2003 18:38 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
BOF: *breathless* Wow.
Daisuke (my muse version): o.O *maniacal laugh* hehe I'm psycho! BOF, why don't you ever write me psycho?
Ken (my MV): *fwaps Dai over the head* You baka. o.O;; So what happens now??
BOF: *still breathless* Wow.
Rochetzu (original muse): *waves hand in front of Birdy* Ummm...BOF? Helllloooooo??
Nenoni (OM): *peeks up in chibi form* Cookies?
Rochetzu: Where the hell do you see cookies? BOF HELLO!! WRITE THE DAMN REVIEW ALREADY! *goes to fwap BOF*
BOF: *glares murderously at Rochi, who shrinks back @_@* Grrr! *comes out of daze* Oh... O.O;;; Sowwy...
That...was...awesome. Can't wait to see more! Would love to see how this story pans out! ^_^ Dai is actually quite attractive psycho...hmmm...
MUST UPDATE ALONG WITH BODY HEAT. I've been waiting forever to see beyond that damn cliffhanger. ^_^ hehe Might need to sick Nenoni on ya! Nah, that cookie freak isn't even intimidating. -_- Pweeeeeease update both soon? Maybe? Possibly? ^_^;;; hehe
BOF | Reviewed By: Ryoko-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2003 12:17 CDT
Comment/Review:
I love this!!! As a matter of fact, I love all your stories... need to read more BodyHeat and Oasis and several other fics of yours, please update them! But yeah, I like the approach to this one, it's cool... | Reviewed By: Yami no Kaiba [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2003 01:58 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*winks* Everythings a ten, just so you know.
mmm, loved the addition. ^_^ Dai's really got it bad, ne? Seems not to be as pissed at those doctor's as I'd expect him to be, but he does throw a few barbs at them.
Incase I didn't say this before, poor Ken. Get's kidnapped, tied up, lectured, hit below the belt (baka Dai, bringing up Osamu), and then fondeled without his permission. If I was him at the moment, I'd be running to the nearest phone and calling the police. After all, Daisuke was stupid enough to give Ken his name. They could believe him, cause I'm feeling sure Dai-kun's gonna have a track record with the boys in blue.
--Emerald Star / YnK
May your plot bunnies always be active, except when you want to sleep. ^_^ | Reviewed By: Ice-is Blue [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2003 06:18 CDT
Comment/Review:
*blinks* Wicked.
*goes back and re-reads warning about the characters not being sane or normal*
*coughs*understatement*coughs*
Definitely not like your usual stuff (at least in terms of PoV), but still good, nonetheless. I like it. Dai's mental monologue screams 'psycho' and 'not quite all there', but he's not incomprehensible. There's a method to his madness. (And isn't it a wonderful reality if everything he says is true?) I'm wondering what Ken's thoughts were.
^^; 'Course I'm also patiently waiting for more BodyHeat and ... *drags out list* Oasis, Difference of Sides, Spectre, A Flare of Dragons ... *scratches head* I'm sure I'm missing one. ^_^
Happy writing! May your plot bunnies be kind. | Reviewed By: bella On: August 05, 2003 05:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*gasps*
My fecking lord jesus christ..
this is fantastic..
i absolutely adore how youve written Daidai.
(hes so much fun to write first person ne?)
I hope you seriously consider continuing this, i is in love with it ~__^
bella |
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