Reviewed By: Kai Tsukiyori On: December 07, 2003 03:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 2 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well I really like the story and how its going. I like how Rezo's desent into insanity is working and I would like to finish. However, I am having a hard time working through the typos and grammar, that does a lot to lowering the rating becasue no matter how good the plot is, it's no good if I can't read it.
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