| "Come Back To Me" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: fluffyearedinulvr2 On: June 15, 2005 16:32 CDT
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this is pretty good so far, a little confusing, but good all the same. I'm really liking the plot so far, it totally leaves the reader hanging on for more and makes them want to know just what the hell happened between inu and kagome. You're doing a good job of presenting it, i like how your not giving the whole story all at once. way to build up the drama. im sure mouths will drop when the whole story comes out. once again, good job and update soon.
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Reviewed By: Twin_Star_of_Suzaku (not signed in) On: June 15, 2005 01:13 CDT
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gah! T_T i'm sorry hun, but your writing is so confusing... I'm never quite sure who is talking, as you NEVER say who is speaking when you have dialogue. I'd recommend finding yourself a beta who can help you make your fic abit more clear... but the storyline has promise, but as it is now, I can't read it without getting extremely confused.... ^^;;
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Reviewed By: KagomeStanton [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2005 00:47 CST
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go go go! finish! i absolutely love it! update soon!
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Reviewed By: Higurashi Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2004 06:02 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great chappie up-date soon^_^
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Reviewed By: inuyashatotallyobsessed On: July 19, 2004 14:29 CDT
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first of all your story does not suck. its cool. i hope we get to here from kouga soon. have fun at collige.
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Reviewed By: Higurashi Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2003 18:10 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i can't wait till u up-date ^_^
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Reviewed By: lovin_sesshomaru_isnteasy But I'm offline so...? On: September 27, 2003 23:23 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Gah I love the plot. Finish your damn story! LoL. Sowwy bout that! *-_-*
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2003 20:38 CDT
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cute...grammer is off..spelling is off..whose dana? i think u should recheck ur chapters before u post them but i like the idea n it could b really good |
Reviewed By: MikoKagome [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2003 14:29 CDT
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why is the name Dana there? Is it Kagome's new name or something? |
Reviewed By: danaiguess [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2003 13:12 CDT
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Yea, I had originally written this to be a short story for a scholorship about life between me and my friends but, then I liked the plot so I changed it into a fan fic! Sorry if the names are messed up in there
-.-' dana |
Reviewed By: PixieStick On: August 07, 2003 12:23 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like ur fic so far but theres a bit of a prob...who tha hell is Dana?? is that u?! cuz instead of "Kagome" u put "Dana" twice! lmfao! i was kinda flippin out cuz i thought u had anutha character who was gunna fall for Inuyasha but anyways...u should try and fix that. update soon ^_^ |
