| "Dirty Little Secret" Reviews/Comments [ 51 ] |
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Reviewed By: DBZ Lover [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2003 13:18 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HEY! What happened there? What's with Kagome? Wait, is she pregnant or something? Anyway, hurry and update, I wanna know what the deal with this is! |
Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2003 12:08 CDT
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i love this story...great job! |
Reviewed By: Lychee SSJ [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2003 17:39 CDT
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wow...uhm, can I just say, wow. I had to laugh at Miroku, the perv. More chappies please? and again, I'd just like to say...wow. |
Reviewed By: gothickbutterfly [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2003 04:16 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic. It is humorous and naughty,two of my favorite things. ^_~ I happy to see Sango have a bigger part than in most fics out there. I can't wait to hear more!! |
Reviewed By: meow On: August 19, 2003 14:34 CDT
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oro... wow blush... update soon? |
Reviewed By: Lady Sekhmet Ka [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2003 03:47 CDT
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OH MY GOD! Your story was GREAT! I feel dirty just ready it ^-^;;
More please? |
Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2003 22:20 CDT
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more more! |
Reviewed By: Jessie On: August 16, 2003 22:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is great! I am hooked! Write more. There is only one problem, where is Chapter 1? |
Reviewed By: Ginka On: August 11, 2003 16:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh my god, I already read this on fanfiction and then I was on vacation, and when I came back, my bookmark said "story not found" (wtf?) anyways, glad to find it here again. You have an amazing style of writing, keep it on. And please repost "mustn't chase the boys" it was so good as far as i read it *curious* |
Reviewed By: the one who sent the suggestion On: August 11, 2003 10:43 CDT
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oh wait, thats only in the first chapter, sorry |
Reviewed By: someone On: August 11, 2003 10:34 CDT
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I noticed that most of it was from a POV of kagome or inuyasha so reading it felt like looking at porn rather than reading a lemon. Try not having so much of that, "third person POV" (In which its not from any characters standpoint) might have not made reading this feel strange for me but hell its your choice now that i think of it do what you want. still very good. |
Reviewed By: Wherever It Lies On: August 10, 2003 23:19 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I cannot believe they deleted this fic on Fanfiction! I was so mad when i saw that. they ovbiously don't know talent when they read it.
Anyway, I really love this story! So good! And I'm glad I got to read the entire thing on the other site before it got deleated.
***PLEASE PUT 'MUST NOT CHASE BOYS' BACK ON!!! I WANT TO READ IT!!!!!*** ^-^ thank-you! |
Reviewed By: firedryad [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2003 17:31 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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cute. not bad... its my first inu-yasha fic... just started watching.
chara |
Reviewed By: Mitsue On: August 09, 2003 15:23 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved tis fic!! It's very original. please keep writing. |
Reviewed By: nekochan30 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2003 23:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your style. It is very sexy without being too bad... I love it! Sango a mistress!!! gooood... *grins evilly* Give us more please!! |
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