| "Dirty Little Secret" Reviews/Comments [ 51 ] |
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2003 22:20 CDT
Comment/Review:
more more! |
Reviewed By: Jessie On: August 16, 2003 22:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is great! I am hooked! Write more. There is only one problem, where is Chapter 1? |
Reviewed By: Ginka On: August 11, 2003 16:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh my god, I already read this on fanfiction and then I was on vacation, and when I came back, my bookmark said "story not found" (wtf?) anyways, glad to find it here again. You have an amazing style of writing, keep it on. And please repost "mustn't chase the boys" it was so good as far as i read it *curious* |
Reviewed By: the one who sent the suggestion On: August 11, 2003 10:43 CDT
Comment/Review:
oh wait, thats only in the first chapter, sorry |
Reviewed By: someone On: August 11, 2003 10:34 CDT
Comment/Review:
I noticed that most of it was from a POV of kagome or inuyasha so reading it felt like looking at porn rather than reading a lemon. Try not having so much of that, "third person POV" (In which its not from any characters standpoint) might have not made reading this feel strange for me but hell its your choice now that i think of it do what you want. still very good. |
Reviewed By: Wherever It Lies On: August 10, 2003 23:19 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I cannot believe they deleted this fic on Fanfiction! I was so mad when i saw that. they ovbiously don't know talent when they read it.
Anyway, I really love this story! So good! And I'm glad I got to read the entire thing on the other site before it got deleated.
***PLEASE PUT 'MUST NOT CHASE BOYS' BACK ON!!! I WANT TO READ IT!!!!!*** ^-^ thank-you! |
Reviewed By: firedryad [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2003 17:31 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
cute. not bad... its my first inu-yasha fic... just started watching.
chara |
Reviewed By: Mitsue On: August 09, 2003 15:23 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved tis fic!! It's very original. please keep writing. |
Reviewed By: nekochan30 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2003 23:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your style. It is very sexy without being too bad... I love it! Sango a mistress!!! gooood... *grins evilly* Give us more please!! |
Reviewed By: jazzy On: August 07, 2003 21:09 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
excellent!! it was very well written!! |
Reviewed By: PixieStick On: August 07, 2003 13:11 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow...that was.....WOW! XD pretty intense sh*t there! ur writing is really good!! |
Reviewed By: Gigi On: August 07, 2003 06:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
What happpened to the rest of the chapters? You had uploaded this already on adultfanfiction and fanfiction. It is an interesting story and you should hurry up and upload the most recent chapter. Sorry if I come off mean, but I hate rereading chapters. YOu were so close to the ending. Please finsih. |
Reviewed By: Ceyana [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2003 10:58 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love that master/good girl stuff. Your writing is awesome. Wrote more!! |
Reviewed By: Sarah On: August 20, 2003 11:11 CDT
Comment/Review:
I know that the story was farther along on ff.net, so could you post the rest here? I love your story it was getting exciting. Keep going! |
Reviewed By: Runishie [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2003 15:34 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
CUTE write more! Sango and Miroku should have a go at finding out shouldn't they. Kagome could get pregnant by the time they find out. |
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