| "Dark Desire" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Title: Dark Desire
Reviewed By: sailorisy [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2007 02:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!! THIS STORY WAS TRULY ONE OF THE BEST VEGITA STORIES I HAVE EVER READ. YOU CAPTURED THAT DARK ESSENCE THAT VEGITA RIGHTFULLY SHOULD HAVE. YOU TOOK IT TO THE DEEPEST LEVEL OF CURRUPTION,DARK DESIRE, OBSESSION, AND INEVITABLE LOVE. WOW!! MOST WRITERS DON'T KNOW HOW TO DO THAT AND EVEN IF THEY TRY, THEY FAIL MISERABLY. I AM TOUGH CRITIC, BUT I KNOW I'M RIGHT WHEN I SAY THIS STORY WAS A TRUE MASTERPIECE. YOU SHOULD WRITE ANOTHER BASED ON THE SAME DARK THEME. I'LL BE THE FIRST TO READ IT. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: chiku [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2006 06:56 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent, love it when vegeta is evil, just as we like him
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Reviewed By: jessibelle On: October 20, 2004 14:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. I'm sorry that this story wasn't finished, but I understand. Your story is so deliciously bad. It's refreshing to see a b/v fic where Vegeta is so in-character with the darker side of his personality. I do feel a little bad for Bulma, but hey what's a girl to do? Thanks for posting such an amazing story.
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Reviewed By: dragonzmoon [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2003 12:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HOTT DAMN, but you're good!! Wonderfully written in the 1st person!! Enjoyed it emmensely! |
Reviewed By: Emmy On: August 22, 2003 13:10 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, this is cool how you can make Veggie act as a badass... I personnaly think he's not an angel at all, and that his relation with Bulma started with purely lust, like you wrote ^_^. Well, go on with your good work! |
Reviewed By: Venus On: August 22, 2003 07:58 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like it write more soon!! |
Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2003 21:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hould have reviewed this when I first read it on AFF, but as those who know me will attest, I can be a lazy wench sometimes...
I certainly hope you're happy with yourself. I've become hopelessly addicted to your fics! |
Reviewed By: The Oujis Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2003 21:01 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok, now THAT was kick ass. That had to be the best intro I've ever read. Keep going PLEASE, I have to see the rest of this story. |
Reviewed By: christabeleve On: August 11, 2003 14:49 CDT
Comment/Review:
Wow love it. You have nailed Veggie ;) |
Reviewed By: Tempestt [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2003 01:45 CDT
Comment/Review:
Just checking |
