| "Against All Odds" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] |
Reviewed By: Nicole fyrewitchery@aol.com On: April 10, 2004 20:38 CDT
Comment/Review:
There's another author by the name of TemptingTemptation who wrote and posted this same story. Is this screenname also you, and did you publish it twice?
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Reviewed By: Stormsan On: March 31, 2004 10:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This one of the best fics I have every read, plz update soon. The suspense is KILL ME!!!!!!!!!!!1
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Reviewed By: mona On: October 26, 2003 15:25 CST
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i know i already review but i keep reading this fic and im hook... please update please please... i'm dying to find out what happen. U TRUELY CAPTURE THE CHARACTERS. PLEASE UPDATE.
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Reviewed By: mona On: September 26, 2003 07:15 CDT
Comment/Review:
update it please!!!!! great story!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2003 06:23 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I read all the way trhough chapter 17 last night on FF.net... once I started I just couldn't stop. This is one hell of a story and I can't wait to read more. |
Reviewed By: dbzobsessed On: August 30, 2003 09:18 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am so hooked on this fic. It is so well written...you have portrayed Bulma and Vegeta perfectly with a awesome storyline. Hope you continue soon. Please don't get distracted!!! |
Reviewed By: LiLPixie On: August 23, 2003 20:14 CDT
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wow,this is the first that i've seen this fic, and let me say that it is wonderful. abosolutely, wonderful! it's fresh! it's new! it has plot! and sexual tension! and, and, and PLOT!!! lol, plot is missing from a lot of stories, but yours is right on! can't wait for the next chapter! |
Reviewed By: Critic On: August 23, 2003 01:14 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah, too bad you stopped when it started gettin goood. Vegeta startin to feel the need, baby lol. lookin forward to readin the rest chika. |
Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 On: August 22, 2003 19:18 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, I loved it! I was so thrilled to see you updated then after I read it I was DESPERATE for more!
Great job! |
Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2003 20:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Listen, you said you needed reviews to keep you motivated. If I leave a review everyday, will that do it?
It has been a long, long time since a B/V has left me wanting more so badly! This has the makings of one HELL of a story.
I am truly impressed with your writing and I can't wait to read the next installment! |
Reviewed By: Yari [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2003 14:41 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
HA! I knew it! Vegeta can't say NO (duh...) to the blue haired goddess! Hahaha! Go Bulma!
Its going pretty good so far! Update soon! |
Reviewed By: Evil Saint On: August 19, 2003 04:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I strated reading this one on FFN and I love it! This is a great story and I can't wait to see how it ends. By the by, you apologised for Bulma seeming a bit insane in some scenes, but I really don't think that it was necessary for you to do that. She never struck me as crazy, only traumatized and that is to be expected. I especially enjoyed seeing Bulma's ruthless side explored. The "poor little rich girl" routine has been done to death and it really is refreshing to see someone willing to break the mold and scetch her in a different light for a change. Great stuff! Keep it up ^_~ |
Reviewed By: The Oujis Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2003 23:20 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a very awesome start. I can't wait to see your next update. Please update, people just suck and NEVER reveiw. I'm faithful,though, and will write one evey time you add a chapter.
Love Ya!! |
Reviewed By: Yari [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2003 10:29 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story! I can't wait to read what happens next. Update Soon!!! |
