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Reviewed By: Pixie Smith [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2004 18:32 CDT
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Squeal! I'm so glad you made it AndersxWufei. I just found myself absolutely loving Anders! I'm glad you're shifting the next part away from Duo. I wanna see more Wufei x Anders! I can't wait to see more AndersxWufei! Such a brilliant fic. Please, please update soon! Thank you for giving us such a great read!
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Reviewed By: fallible On: May 04, 2004 17:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i luv this story! wow! i've never seen such a good wufei-dilemna fic! awesome! keep up the great work! please please please update SOON!
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Reviewed By: Pixie Smith [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2004 19:25 CDT
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Shocking! Totally unexpected development but I love it. I totally adore your new character Anders. I hope you make him a nice guy, though from the way Duo's analysed him, it doesn't seem like it. It would be good to see Wufei get a new friend, maybe even make the others jealous. Great chapter!
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: May 01, 2004 16:27 CDT
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To be honest I do not know what to make of your OC. For a while I thought that everyone including Noin knew of Heero's and Wufei's affair. Right now I can't even guess why you would have Duo following Wufei or what will Heero do when he sees Wufei with Anderson and Duo following Wufei. After all if I recall correctly Heero doesn't know that Duo knows that He had an affair with Wufei. Really I just don't know what to make of this fic. I can't say if I like it or dislike. I guess all I can say is that I find it intiguing the way you depict the characters, their emotions and their behaviour. Keep up the good job.
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: March 28, 2004 18:15 CST
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Wow! That was so sad. Pathetically sad. Love is a wonderous and stupid thing. Personally I say they both should leave Heero. But wait this is miss zero tolerance for cheating speaking. Probably this fic provokes so much emotion because in one way or another most readers can identify with the pain. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Pixie Smith [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2004 12:18 CST
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It is so good, but so sad. Duo isn't sure he can love. Does that mean he doesn't have the strength to let Heero go? The thing I love most about your fic is all of the underlying messages. The way you don't need to come out and say anything, but imply a great number of things. I'm really scared now, that this will turn out to be a 1x2x5 fic. Please give me an advanced warning if it will be. All the same, your writing is so brilliant I envy you. It's just so great. Can't wait for more updates.
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Reviewed By: Pixie Smith [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2004 05:43 CST
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I feel so sorry for Wufei. It's so sad that Heero cannot love him. I really don't want him to be sacrificed so that Heero and Duo can be happy. Oh please, can't you make it so that Wufei does get Heero? Please don't make it a 1x2x5 fanfic. Also, please update this one! Again, you know what I say, you're a great writer!
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Reviewed By: Cherry Pie On: September 06, 2003 23:39 CDT
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Awesome fic. And I loved the characterization. Keep on writing, chick. |
Reviewed By: theLeopardGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2003 12:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Beautifully written, I found this fic fairly captivating. The angst seemed so human, natural, rather than over-done and melodramatic - the same with the characterisation. Your style of writing really is spot on. You seem to have a real gem here. And if I'm being honest, I'd have to admit to having a bit of a moon fetish myself. |
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