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| "Sky Arc" Reviews/Comments [ 24 ] | | Pages (2): [ « < 1 2 ] | Reviewed By: Pixie Smith [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2004 17:33 CDT
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I feel sorry for Anders, it seems like he's getting the short end of the stick, Wufei only notices him vaguely whereas as soon as Heero shows up, Wufei is completely aware of him. I suppose I feel sorry for Duo too, he has a cheating boyfriend and he's beginning to lose his personality. Your writing makes me wonder whether Anders is devious but in my opinion, he's just being read wrong. I thought it was sweet how Anders protected Wufei. Now all we need is for Wufei to fall head over heels in love with Anders and for Heero to stop noticing Wufei and give Duo the love he deserves. Then we can have a happy ending and everything can be a bed of roses!
| Reviewed By: Pixie Smith [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2004 17:33 CDT
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I feel sorry for Anders, it seems like he's getting the short end of the stick, Wufei only notices him vaguely whereas as soon as Heero shows up, Wufei is completely aware of him. I suppose I feel sorry for Duo too, he has a cheating boyfriend and he's beginning to lose his personality. Your writing makes me wonder whether Anders is devious but in my opinion, he's just being read wrong. I thought it was sweet how Anders protected Wufei. Now all we need is for Wufei to fall head over heels in love with Anders and for Heero to stop noticing Wufei and give Duo the love he deserves. Then we can have a happy ending and everything can be a bed of roses!
| Reviewed By: Dee Dee On: June 04, 2004 18:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I normally hate original characters, but I really like your Anders. Yes, I do feel that he is manipulative, but I think that it's just him trying make a move while he has a chance. I mean, come on, if he doesn't attack when Wufei is vulnerable, when else would Wufei be willing to accept him? I think that once Anders can get Wufei to notice him, Wufei will find a lot in Anders that he'll eventually love. In my humble opinion, Anders is able to understand Wufei in a way that Heero was never able to. It'll be good for Wufei to actually have someone who can and wants to take care of him, someone he can lean on. I'm insanely excited about the next chapter! Hope to see Wufei/Anders action.
| Reviewed By: priscel(GEE) On: June 03, 2004 15:15 CDT
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sorry about all the typos and repeated words, hope that it is helpful...
| Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2004 11:25 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! I just wanted to say wow... I can't wait to read more to see what happens next. Duo's concern for wufei and Wufei's lingering thoughts on Duo suggest that the two may feel more for each other than just comradery. Especially since since duo thought he didn't understand or know if he could call what he feels for Heero love?! Duo, practicially an fountain of emotions can't identify love... is there irony there or what? but it does make since that he would be able to identify it if he has never felt it before Hee-chan and plus the circumstances in his life right now I don't think he has given much thought to the possibility that he loves both the stoic pilots? Same for Wufei, so hurt that he's blinded by his wounded pride and Heero's forceful actions. Why can't Heero be as gentle with Wu as he is with Duo? I think Heero knows he loves them both but I don't think he understands. Once either Wu or Duo face the face that he loves the other two and then attempts to pursue then will things get better I think.. I hope. threesomes although are not liked by society, I think it could work for them. to make them all happy. Oh I don't like that Anders guy, I feel he's exploiting Wu's emotional turmoil so he can get some nuky and he can best Heero by take one of the lovers he still wants. Onward to the next story in the series!!! WAHOOOOO! (I think I ate too much sugar this morning) GREAT story!! thank you!
| Reviewed By: Anny On: May 31, 2004 00:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well I must say I love this fics. I don't care if it end up a 1x2x5, 1x2, 1x5 but for some reason I don't like Anders. The way he seem to know Wufei and the way he manipulate him. Wufei is not at his strongest right about now, and Anders seem to take advantage on that. The way Wufei seem incapable of dealing with this new guys. I thinks Anders as some hiding agenda concerning Wufei. I love the love triangle and I know that how ever it will end, I know thing will not be the same as before. Thing have changed, hiding feeling have come to the light, I betrayal I have found. Something his bound to happen, but I don't think anything good will come from Wufei and Anders. He look to mush like Heero but have none of his charm as far as am concerned. No I really don't like him, I'm glad that Duo went after Wufei altough I am confuse as what will happen next. Please Update! I'm dying to see what will happen next, and who will Heero Choose as a partner, I think that he choice will titl the battle ever further!
| Reviewed By: Pixie Smith [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2004 18:32 CDT
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Squeal! I'm so glad you made it AndersxWufei. I just found myself absolutely loving Anders! I'm glad you're shifting the next part away from Duo. I wanna see more Wufei x Anders! I can't wait to see more AndersxWufei! Such a brilliant fic. Please, please update soon! Thank you for giving us such a great read!
| Reviewed By: fallible On: May 04, 2004 17:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i luv this story! wow! i've never seen such a good wufei-dilemna fic! awesome! keep up the great work! please please please update SOON!
| Reviewed By: Pixie Smith [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2004 19:25 CDT
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Shocking! Totally unexpected development but I love it. I totally adore your new character Anders. I hope you make him a nice guy, though from the way Duo's analysed him, it doesn't seem like it. It would be good to see Wufei get a new friend, maybe even make the others jealous. Great chapter!
| Reviewed By: black beauty On: May 01, 2004 16:27 CDT
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To be honest I do not know what to make of your OC. For a while I thought that everyone including Noin knew of Heero's and Wufei's affair. Right now I can't even guess why you would have Duo following Wufei or what will Heero do when he sees Wufei with Anderson and Duo following Wufei. After all if I recall correctly Heero doesn't know that Duo knows that He had an affair with Wufei. Really I just don't know what to make of this fic. I can't say if I like it or dislike. I guess all I can say is that I find it intiguing the way you depict the characters, their emotions and their behaviour. Keep up the good job.
| Reviewed By: black beauty On: March 28, 2004 18:15 CST
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Wow! That was so sad. Pathetically sad. Love is a wonderous and stupid thing. Personally I say they both should leave Heero. But wait this is miss zero tolerance for cheating speaking. Probably this fic provokes so much emotion because in one way or another most readers can identify with the pain. Keep up the good work.
| Reviewed By: Pixie Smith [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2004 12:18 CST
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It is so good, but so sad. Duo isn't sure he can love. Does that mean he doesn't have the strength to let Heero go? The thing I love most about your fic is all of the underlying messages. The way you don't need to come out and say anything, but imply a great number of things. I'm really scared now, that this will turn out to be a 1x2x5 fic. Please give me an advanced warning if it will be. All the same, your writing is so brilliant I envy you. It's just so great. Can't wait for more updates.
| Reviewed By: Pixie Smith [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2004 05:43 CST
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I feel so sorry for Wufei. It's so sad that Heero cannot love him. I really don't want him to be sacrificed so that Heero and Duo can be happy. Oh please, can't you make it so that Wufei does get Heero? Please don't make it a 1x2x5 fanfic. Also, please update this one! Again, you know what I say, you're a great writer!
| Reviewed By: Cherry Pie On: September 06, 2003 23:39 CDT
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Awesome fic. And I loved the characterization. Keep on writing, chick. | Reviewed By: theLeopardGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2003 12:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Beautifully written, I found this fic fairly captivating. The angst seemed so human, natural, rather than over-done and melodramatic - the same with the characterisation. Your style of writing really is spot on. You seem to have a real gem here. And if I'm being honest, I'd have to admit to having a bit of a moon fetish myself. | | Pages (2): [ « < 1 2 ] |
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