| "Honeysuckles and Moonlight Shreds" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: kenkaofan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2014 23:19 EDT
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i hope you still working on this story, it's really interresting ;)
pls update soon
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Reviewed By: (lazy) EvilBunny On: January 12, 2005 23:48 EST
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...I like you. And I like your story. It flows nicely, and your descriptions are colorfully captivating. I can't wait to see where you're going with it.
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Reviewed By: The Prophet Talia [MediaMiner Member] On: February 29, 2004 00:42 EST
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I didn't read all of this really thouroughly, but what I did read I thought was great. I frankly think your style of writing is great, I love long descriptions when they're done right, and you do them right. Your writing style gives a lot of color to the characters. I hope I have time to come back and reread this slowly (right now I need to get to some much neglected work). And I totally agree about Tomoe and Kenshin!
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Reviewed By: Lord Aaron [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2004 17:01 EST
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The Psyco here, updates anytime soon? -your english is improving too, lot less errors than "taste of your life"-
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Reviewed By: Vitaralastla On: October 19, 2003 00:18 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a really well writen fan-fic, and I've enjoyed it so far, so keep writing!!!!!!!! Also, I wanna say you should try your hand at writing a novel or something more formal. From reading this fic, I'd say you've got more talent then a lot of 'professional' authors out there, and I think it'd be good if you tried to apply it to origional characters of your own somehow..... Anyway, I'm done rambeling, so keep the good work!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: SK On: August 24, 2003 15:43 EDT
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Personally, I like the verboseness. But that's because I read Fitzgerald, who can take three pages to describe one tree. :)
Very interesting story, and different premise. I hope you continue soon. |
Reviewed By: Kithkin On: August 10, 2003 10:42 EDT
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Lovely prose, haunting in fact. I enjoyed this tremendously, and while I don't necessarily like the thought of a teacher-student Kenshin-Karou, you write it so beautifully that I cannot help but look forward to a continuation. Thank you. |
Reviewed By: ToHeLlWiThThENiCkS On: August 08, 2003 04:33 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
hiya... this is really good keep it up and maybe if you cut down a bit of the words and put more of people chatting and having conversations and stuff. but keep up the good work!!! i really enjoyed it. i haven't read a student'teacher pairing before but i like it!!!! update soon!!! PLEEEEAAAASSSSEEEE |
Reviewed By: s_midnite [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2003 03:12 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah, yes.....explaining the reasons of the ratings.
Style of writing: 7/10
I personally would have liked a little more dialouge, but maybe that's just me.
Spelling and Grammar: 7/10 (6.5, really)
A few misspellings, here and there, and you tend to change tenses-- always try to stay in the same tense.
Originality/ Creativity: 8/10
Ah, the teacher/student pairing. I like those...had a teacher in highschool who would qualify for such a situation....damn, he was hot.
Enjoyment Factor: 8/10.
With a few touch ups this would be an absoulutly enthralling fic. It IS a tad too wordy,
some might be reluctant to read the story.
Overall Rating: 8/10.
This is so far a pretty decent fic. I'm looking forward to reading the rest. |
