| "Arms of drakness" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] |
Title: Arms of Darkness
Reviewed By: Janie50989 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2006 16:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Really great chapters,I hope u finish it soon,I want to see what happens.Well,keep up the great work,& catch ya later.
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Title: Evil
Reviewed By: Blackfoxofevil On: September 10, 2005 11:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story was realy neat just up date ok.The lemon was cool.But why is shido still a vampire or a normal human i mean come on ,you can't have a good story with out have shido being a vampire .But over all i like it. JUST UP DATE !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! or I shall kill you with my claws.(is 3/4 demon 1/4 human ) got it. *straingly you* MUHAHAHAHAHAHAHYAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!........
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Title: Arms of darkness
Reviewed By: Janie50989 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2005 21:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story.Though the spelling & grammer could be better,other than that I hope u finish it.When u do please e-mail me Janie50989@sbcglobal.net.Catch ya later.
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Title: chap. 7
Reviewed By: moonscout11 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2005 15:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was good, and it's getting good so far. ^_^ please keep on the good work! by the way, this is moonscout. ^_^ it's a really good story!
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Reviewed By: KitsuneFox (not signed in) On: February 05, 2005 00:43 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
update! I love this fic! Oh and a question comes to mind about the series. Did Shido and Riho do it in the last episode or do they always sleep like that? >.< please answer. luv from Kit
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Reviewed By: lemonysnicketlimey On: December 09, 2004 20:16 CST
Comment/Review:
you have to finish the story it is a great story!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Hellsing_AlucardxSeras On: September 25, 2004 17:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMFG! I LOVe it! Lemon..ehehe.....mmm....well, almost lemon...more citrus please?! Please hurry up and update 'cause I am in a place mof no return(the love for this uniqe, kick-ass story)..Continue or I suck you dry of your life.....
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Reviewed By: inuyashafreak247 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2004 01:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was pretty good.Some spelling mistakes but over all really good.Very creative.
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Title: Have you finnished it?
Reviewed By: Ai Shitteru [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2004 19:59 CDT
Comment/Review:
I've finnished reading all you've written in this story. Is that the end? I want more! Please update soon. I think that your story is really interesting, but I want to read when Shido becomes a vampire (if he does so in your story). You're a great writer.
a gr |
Reviewed By: The Fallen Angel of Death On: December 14, 2003 05:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You write as one with experience in poetry. Your story is wonderful and beautiful. But one thing, though your writting is original you must stop having more than one person talking in a paragraph. One person should talk in only one paragraph, makes it easier to read and easier to understand. For example: Shido sighed, "You always look so beautiful." it was no lie. "As you are handsome Lord Shido." Riho commented before she could stop herself. Something like that you know? I mean, you just read easier and the paragraphs look less jumbled. Only trying to help, you can totally ignore me and I'll still be completely content and happy with the story. Do you enjoy being evil by the way? Leaving it in such a cruel place? You don't really have to be good at the lemon part just so long as it happens is good. Continue soon k? Ja Ne.
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Reviewed By: Mess or Fujinakaheero [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2003 14:05 CST
Comment/Review:
I really like the story, its coming along well. I'm looking forward to reading your next chapter very soon. Just keep writing the story. Oh yeah I like how you made the characters, even tho Yuyoi is one of my favorite characters it still gives the story some life. Hn? Fujinakaheero
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Title: Wonderful!
Reviewed By: Kamino [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2003 16:48 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is quite a great story, I love how you played the characters out. I do believe that it could use a touch more detail (but then again, I'm a detail freak ^^) and there are some grammar, as well as spelling, errors. If you would like, I would be more than happy to help edit your story. =^.^= ~Kami
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Reviewed By: Lea_D [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2003 14:53 CDT
Comment/Review:
Well!! Aren't you the teasing type... I think i might be the only moron reviewing you but whatever... just keep writing please?
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Reviewed By: Lea_D [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2003 02:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Holds hand up to the screen* Why?!?! Why did you stop there!!! I should hope you get more written. *Hand begins to twitch* Soon! I'm gonna have a melt down if you don't hurry!!!
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