| "The black rose of gunsmoke" Reviews/Comments [ 19 ] |
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Reviewed By: unimportant On: October 09, 2004 00:36 CDT
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Not to rag on you or anything, but you're supposed to start a new paragraph everytime a different person speaks in a dialogue. It gets confusing otherwise.
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Reviewed By: Lady Dragonshade On: September 13, 2004 18:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Like it, Love, it, think you should write more!!! I think it's a good fic and I can't wait for the next chapter!! L&P, Lady Dragonshade
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Reviewed By: Lady Dragonshade On: August 15, 2004 02:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it. Keep writing, and as you go, your spelling and grammar will get better. Just practice. Other than that, keep up the good work! L&P, Lady Dragonshade
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Reviewed By: StarMillions On: August 02, 2004 01:32 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it's saying something if I'm checking back to see if you've posted anymore. Please post more. this is good so far.
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Reviewed By: mona On: July 28, 2004 15:36 CDT
Comment/Review:
I forgot to say... UPDATE SOON!!!!!
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Reviewed By: mona On: July 28, 2004 15:36 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW... its been so long that i read trigun fanfic... great story...what happened to KNIVES? i like the love triangle:)
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Reviewed By: KD On: July 18, 2004 17:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this story! It's original and funny! I can't wait for the next chapter! Update soon!
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Reviewed By: Sailor Celaeno [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2004 12:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like your style of writing. It's not too different from my own style. I didn't think your spelling or grammar was terrible or anything of that sort. The concept is great because I'd love to see the two of them together. I REALLY enjoy this story and I'm just dying to know what happens next. ;_; Over all this story is really great and made me anxious to know what more you're going to come out with. I sincerely hope you'll continue with this since there's so much possibility. One last thing is a suggestion. Maybe you can use paragraphs and indentation to make the presentation more organized and more readable.
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Title: please write more
Reviewed By: tesa On: May 31, 2004 14:36 CDT
Comment/Review:
write more please, please,please,please. really good write more. thank you
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Title: hell yeah
Reviewed By: whit On: January 18, 2004 18:09 CST
Comment/Review:
wow good story but please dont let meryl marry johnathon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! M/V M/V M/V all the way hoping for a lemon to a good one i know im sucha hentai hehehe overall rating:10
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Reviewed By: mona On: October 11, 2003 23:24 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
WOW!!!!! can't wait!!!!
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Reviewed By: kuramaandkarasu, yes me! On: October 06, 2003 10:30 CDT
Comment/Review:
UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!! AND HAVE MORE KNIVES!!! yes... he is on my... 'list'... I'm embarrassed now... and all u v/m lovers... knives is cuter... k/m please~~
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Reviewed By: Lea_D [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2003 23:10 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hello! I guess i just wanna say good stroy... why make it Vash/Meryl/Knives! I think that whole thing is so cute in a strange way! ok well i'm gone for now bye!
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Reviewed By: Angel452 On: September 19, 2003 15:24 CDT
Comment/Review:
It should definatly be V/M. Will Meryl really leave? Please update soon. |
Reviewed By: Ky On: September 14, 2003 20:47 CDT
Comment/Review:
not a bad idea... knives and meryl
it can be A GREAT FIC. |
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