| "N-A-U" Reviews/Comments [ 24 ] |
Reviewed By: starlight_dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2006 17:24 CDT
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Is this going to be yaoi? It could be given the plot line. It could just be my perverted mind looking for an orgy excuse. I can't wait to see a smart Kakarotto facing Vegeta. A smart@$$ed verbal fight of titantic size.
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Title: N-A-U
Reviewed By: vbkjsdhbfvsjkhk On: February 06, 2005 00:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this fic so please more chapters
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Reviewed By: Chief316 On: July 08, 2004 11:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed this fanfic so far. But so long between up dates is killing me! Please update it soon. I look forward to the next chapters.
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Reviewed By: kitkat On: November 19, 2003 21:34 CST
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hey! Very good chapters, but... where's Vegeta?!? Now seriously, you write very well and the idea of Bulma raping Goku is just... i don't have words to describe... new at least. And Goku's behavior is what i like the most, you're not making him the dumb one as we are acostumated. I hope chapter five come out soon!
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Reviewed By: Hellwise [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2003 20:12 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your style of writing is pure perfection. I love the little details you add. Perchance are you planning to write more? If you've hit a snag connect Hellwise proffesional muse.
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Reviewed By: mely On: November 15, 2003 18:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story! I look forward to reading more.
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Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2003 20:44 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well... I almost felt sorry for Chi... but then I remembered who she was....
Bulma RAPING Goku?!?! That is a funny thought...
So Chi is gonna stay on the ship and read her romance novel, huh? Good! As long as she's on that ship, she can't end up in Vegeta's bed!
Great chapter... but there was something missing.
.. let's see... what was it? I can't quite put my finger on it...
Oh, yes! No Vegeta! Where is the great and mighty prince of all Saiyans??? I miss him! *sobs* |
Reviewed By: kitkat On: September 07, 2003 12:05 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey!? where's Vegeta? i'm itching to see Vegeta and Kakarotto face each other.
by the way, very good chapter! Kakarotto knows how to confuse woman, and must say i love him being the sexy and INTELIGENT saiyan. I don't know why people tend to think and write him dumb, you are making a very good job in erasing this costume. (english is not my native language, i might have done some mistakes so forgive me ok?)
Hurry please!? |
Title: vegetagirl101
Reviewed By: vegetagirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2003 13:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story!!!!! |
Title: *SMIRK*
Reviewed By: dragonzmoon [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2003 10:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Fabulous writing, guys! I love this fic!!!
"And as for you.. Turlie-sa! It's the couch for you!!!!*Gurr..* Your a BAD BOY!! BAD! BAD!"
Heh..
"What.. did.. I do? *scowl*
*snort* Yeah right! *smacks Turles head* |
Reviewed By: christabeleve61 On: September 06, 2003 09:39 CDT
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Turles did a bad bad thing. I love your protral of Chichi. Where is Vegeta? |
Reviewed By: Laelia [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 1969 18:00 CST
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Hm, Kakarrot goes all sexy, how cool! Anyway I must say I am sick and tired of the fics in which Bulma is a sex godess who gets all goood man while ChiCh is not considered good enough for the left overs. She's a princess for GOd's sake. The funny think is that I am a fan of Bulma's but enough is enough! I find Chi preatty beautiful and it's clear that in this fic she has a different personality so all that I can say is pleeeaaasssseeee don't make Goku fall for BUlma |
Reviewed By: SinuYasha On: December 31, 1969 18:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it update soon. |
Reviewed By: jasmine On: August 23, 2003 21:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice fic, keep up the work. By the way, I like how your interpretation of Chi Chi in this fic. Don't let her give in too easily now ... |
Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 On: August 22, 2003 18:39 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice chapter... Very interesting... I kinda like Chi... no... wait... I can NEVER say that convincingly.
Now, on to more important things. Bulma and Goku had hot sex, you know that's fine with me... just so long as Vegeta doesn't soil his hands (or any other part of his body) with Chi Chi.
And oh yeah...
WHERE THE HELL WAS VEGETA???? |
Reviewed By: Bardockgurl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2003 09:10 CDT
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Oh... *puts away sporks* This was nice and early in the day... :D - Sooo, Goku sexes up Bulma eh?? the frisky devils...>:)
DAMN you made Goku sooooo sexy in this fic!! (Not that he isn't very sexy anyway!)
I love it!! Now I have to wait until next friday... *sobs* |
Reviewed By: Bardockgurl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2003 15:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hurry UP!!! OK, I KNOW it's not Friday - but I still want to see what happens...
There is an enormous, impressive amount of imagination gone into this story - a blessing in the quagmire of tired, uninspired fics that roam around here...
*Sharpens box of already extra-sharp sporks* |
Reviewed By: dragonzmoon [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2003 12:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WooHoo! This is commin' along nicely! Nice portrayal of Chi-Chi! She's hopefully gonna' buckle soon! Will they even make it to Vegetasei, before anything happens? |
Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2003 18:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, personally I wish you would post a warning before I read about Chi Chi having any sort of sexual activity... but other than that it was a great chapter (An appearance by Vegeta would have made it better though). |
Reviewed By: kitkat On: August 17, 2003 15:20 CDT
Comment/Review:
hi!
This almost crossover is really something to keep one eye on. I wonder why Bulma is acting like a B****. And why Vegeta wants Kakarotto so much.
I'm waiting for the answers in the next chapters, which i hope come up soon. |
Reviewed By: dragonzmoon [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2003 16:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderfully written! Beautiful! I really love it! Can't wait for next friday!! Bulma and Chichi as Dirty pair- very original, gotta love it!! |
Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2003 13:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am SO glad SOMEONE told be about this fic, or I may have never read it!
Excellent work. The story is well thought out and well written so far. I can not wait until next Friday so that I can read more. You have the beginnings of a fantastic fic here and I'm glad the two of you have decided to write it (for what ever diabolical reasons you have for doing it). |
Reviewed By: Fate On: August 08, 2003 22:50 CDT
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Awesome story so far. It's easy to get into it, even in the first chapter. I can't wait to see what happens between them all, and not just for the lemon scenes for once, lol. Please update soon. Keep up the great work! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: heidi On: August 08, 2003 20:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this fic and I can not wait till the next chapter comes out. This is one of the best fic I have come accross so far keep up the good work. Update soon!!! |
