| "The New Student and Kagome's Secret" Reviews/Comments [ 1030 ] |
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Reviewed By: Priestess Kylie-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2004 00:25 CDT
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness(not signed on) On: September 13, 2004 14:45 CDT
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I loved the new chapter, but isn't the fact that Inuyasha was next in line to become Lord of the West a little too obvious? I mean anyone who's taken a history class should know that that's how it works. Of course when a King or someone like that is killed his son or the peson who killed him takes over. And since Inuyasha was the only son left it should have been clear that he was the heir. Japanese history alone holds hundreds of cases just like it. That secret was too easy to keep, in fact it was so obvious that it shouldn't have been a secret at all. I just felt like this was one of those "DUH" things.
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Reviewed By: AngelOfDiamonds~Lia~ On: September 13, 2004 09:23 CDT
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YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY! I love your story! Update asap!
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Reviewed By: Higurashi Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2004 06:09 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
so gald you up-dated-ed-ed can't wait to read more^_^
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Reviewed By: Miztikal_Dragon nsi On: September 13, 2004 02:24 CDT
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WOW! Great work. Please keep up the great work and update asap. I can't wait to find out what happens next. Krystal.
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Reviewed By: Lil'Inu [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2004 00:59 CDT
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poor Yash, that's quite a desition he's got there. at least Kag knows now and there are no more nasty suprizes between them. right? can't wait to read more. up date soon and keep up the good work!!
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Reviewed By: Priestess Kylie-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2004 00:32 CDT
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Reviewed By: spumante [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2004 23:18 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
well i found this story the other day and finally got caught up. I think it is really great and i loved how you described the castle i could picture it in my head. Anyway I cant wait to find out what inu decided to do and i wish inu and kag would just admit there feelings for each other already (but i understand why you havent done it and i like the way it frustrates me b/c that way it is like the show but yeah i wish it would happen already). oh and the whole kag/bak fight was cool mad props. Anyway just wanted to let you know i really liked it and cant wait for the next chapter so update soon please (and you are doing a really great job of updating lately). Thanks
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Reviewed By: Malice Elisa On: September 12, 2004 22:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yay! I like that you're updating more it's great! I love how this is going so far. poor inuyasha he has a lot to think about and do. update soon
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Title: YAY
Reviewed By: Brennen_Sie_Drachen(nli) On: September 12, 2004 21:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yeah i never seem to log in. tehehe. I is soooo very happy you updated so quickly! I love this story! ^_^ and I loves you for writing it!
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Reviewed By: essie [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2004 21:34 CDT
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this is a great fanfic please update soon
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Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2004 17:14 CDT
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cools beans.
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Reviewed By: Doujo (dlg) On: September 12, 2004 14:43 CDT
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Me again! I really like this fic, and you're right... you update faster!! Yay! *make happy dance* I hope you'll update soon again ;)
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Reviewed By: Zelix (Not logged on) On: September 12, 2004 14:26 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Beautiful chapter, simply beautiful... well done, REALLY well done.
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Title: Yay!!!
Reviewed By: Ikiwi (not logged in) On: September 12, 2004 12:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
w00t!! Another excellent chapter!!! Please update soon! I love reading this! It is soooo awesomely great! Hmm... I'm just wondering, but when is there going to be some major Inu/Kag fluff? I can't wait until they admit their feelings for each other. And uhm.. will there be some... lemony events? LOL!!! Anyways! Thank you for the chapter! Please update soon!!
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