| "The New Student and Kagome's Secret" Reviews/Comments [ 1030 ] |
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Reviewed By: Fishisk On: November 01, 2003 14:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I heartily enjoyed this fanfic. It's so sweet; Myouga is a lot out of character but he always annoyed me to begin with. And I'm fairly sure her name is not Yuri, but Yumi.. Still, it's an interesting fic, especially the way you've kept changing the plot around, going from highschool fic to battle for the fate of humanity to an internal struggle with Inuyasha's past. My only real complaint is the use of 'drug' instead of 'dragged' and the attempted raping of Kagome twice so far. It's a bit repetative. However, it's your story and whatever you feel is necessary is good. Keep writing!
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Reviewed By: InuYashu [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2003 01:24 CST
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Tetsusaiga= tetsaiga. WRITE MORE OR YOU SHALL DIE BY MY CLAWS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: clashkitty43 On: October 31, 2003 23:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic! It's really original and well-written. Don't stop updating!!
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Reviewed By: FireDemon86 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2003 15:19 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey thanks I feel special. Any way same as always UPDATE SOON. I total love this fic it's too cute the way they dance around their feelings.
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Reviewed By: Kaye On: October 31, 2003 15:02 CST
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Yay, yay, yay. You got the chapter up. *Bounces around with a smile* Such a good chapter, and Myouga was really subtle, but not enough for Inuyasha. Really good, wonderful!
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Reviewed By: Katina108 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2003 14:10 CST
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wow! what an awesome chapter! It's really great and I got mentioned too! I feel so special. I think maybe the wind dude should come back again, or perhaps onigumo? who knows! Hope you update soon!
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Reviewed By: Kitsune_Bi [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2003 13:39 CST
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heh heh heh they're still too shy to say anything about how they feel. I can't wait until they get to the castle, I'm really wondering what Inu-Yasha's decision will be.
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Reviewed By: Priestess Kylie-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2003 12:26 CST
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Reviewed By: jubilation15 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2003 11:15 CST
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Wah so cute....so excellent introducing the "seduction growl" I just loved that. What will happen when they reach the palace with the group be shocked that Inuyasha is sort of Royalty? I can't wait.
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Reviewed By: InuKitsuneMiko(not signed in!) On: October 31, 2003 08:04 CST
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hey kule ur finaly updating!!! but wow i couldn't update that fast with those loooooong chapters. but anyway, blah blah please update blah *gets on knees* blahahahaaa... (u get the pic, right? o.0
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Reviewed By: Higurashi Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2003 05:43 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
still luv this fic can't wait till next up-date
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Reviewed By: ady anhee 999 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2003 01:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love the story, it has been great so far, and I can't wait to read more. (hense the review. *wink wink*) :P
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Reviewed By: Lor [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2003 20:59 CST
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cliffys are pure evil ::pouting:: no fair!!
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Reviewed By: Kitsune_Bi [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2003 20:11 CST
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YAAAAAAAAAAA!!!! @-@
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Reviewed By: Kagome's Reincarnation On: October 30, 2003 19:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic just please have Kagome and Inuyasha get it together aleady.Have them declare their love to one another when they are not about to die.
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